smile again LOL

[arithion]

Title: Smile: With Me
Author: Arithion
Rating: G
Genre: Angstish, bit of drama… um… yeah
Pairing: None really, heavy Fuji/Tez friendship… imply all you want though…ok and I’m willing to admit shonen-ai hints too…*grumbles*
Chapter: Nine
Summary: What’s behind a smile…?
Warning: Shonen ai heh… and well… I rewatched 21 and 22… and this is kinda

Comments

[moffit]

The part where Fuji ends up on his back is confusing, I thought Tezuka had knocked him over. I do like the part where Fuji’s sister is happy that he’s not mad for her letting Tezuka into Fuji’s personal space. Nobody needs an annoyed Fuji smiling at them.

And the comment on the 10 minutes was funny as hell.

"I wonder if your ten minute obsession applies to everything." Fuji said, eyeing Tezuka with a raised eyebrow.

Tezuka pulled Fuji to him, one hand lowering to fondle the shorter boy's ass. "If you want... you can find out... I'm sure it won't take that long to make you scream."

*hides*

[arithion]

you are evil... evil ... and did I mention evil?

Sadly... it seems that evil people get what they want...

You so owe me FujixRyoma smut for this...

[moffit]

I'm writing! >.>;;;

[lina_lau]

Wah~~! Another chapter! XD And damnit why can't they just kiss??? XD

Fuji chuckled. “No fair. You’re no fun, Tezuka.”

There was a brief pause, before the taller boy murmured softly in response. “Oh, and I try so hard.”

I love that bit so so very much! X3 (<-- squees heartily) Can't wait for the next chapter now! ^_^ *huggles*

[arithion]

well sadly, thanks to moffit... you all ahve to wait for the next chapter.... so nyah

Throw rotten tomatoes at her... I have another side story to write...

[earethiel]

i've officially ran out of nice things to say about your ficcies...but i ADORE them just as much!! *huggles arithion and her ficcies.again* ^^;

hai,hai, you really made me screamed 'so kiss already!' and had my cousin looking on like i'd grow horns or something...oh thou art the devil who make me suffer in anticipation... XP

“I don’t need…this…” A finger rubbed against his lips this time… outlining the smile. “I want what you hide.”

i was listening to one of Ryudo Uzaki's beautiful piece of music while reading this and thought that my heart would break...

[arithion]

*blushes... yet again*

Thank you hehe... I'm so glad you like it.

Yeah... I have no idea where half of it comes from, but the boys kind of took the fic out of my hands long ago lol

okies...well... off to write... something lol

*hugs*

[earethiel]

*hugs back*

okies and don't forget to come back with more fics
and tell them boys to snog each other already

tee hee hee...btw, love your icon ^__^ *huggles arith, her ficcies and her icon* XP

[arithion]

*rofl* kirakins made that icon hehe I love it too

Well... currently trying to write a smut bunny that decked me... not too sure on it though...

[gothiquelolita]

have been following this fic faithfully but this is the first time I'm leaving a comment ^^;; anyway, yay!!! I think it's all turning out very nicely :D

I love the tension there... I like the way you present Fuji's vulnerability and how Tezuka is the only one who can cheer him up and make him feel better <3 It's just so Tezuka :) Whilst I really like how their relationship is going now (as in, non-physical), like the rest of the people who've left you comments, ... I also think Tezuka really should just kiss Fuji soon!!! *laughs* >:D

[arithion]

wow... *hugs* thank you!!!

Well, I'm trying to show that Fuji understands Tez too, but since it's from Fuji's pov... that gets a little hard...

Thank you for reading... I'm working on 10 atm lol

[makikoigami]

Okay... I just HAVE to say that... where's the kiss?

Not that I'd appreciate it if you'd speed things up, since I very much like how this has been moving for these nince chapters, but... *sighs* Pretty. Too damn pretty. Such a nice Tezuka. Much nicer than I'd characterise him.

*im complete awe over this and waiting impatiently for every new chapter*

[arithion]

wow... thank you very much!

Oh come now *huggles* Tezuka... he's such a sweetie /snicker hehe

well I'm about to post ten... soooo yeah hope you like that one too!