Smile... again!

[arithion]

Title: Smile: Will Me
Author: Arithion
Rating: G
Genre: Angstish, bit of drama… um… yeah
Pairing: Kinda sorta almost TezxFuji
Chapter: Eleven
Summary: What’s behind a smile…?
Warning: Shonen ai, Cuteness, um… snugglieness and crap too.
Notes: Sorry it took so long to get out. tenipuri_fusion is at complete and utter fault… it’s been distracting me. But chapters

Comments

[fic_faery]

OH I love the Moonlight Sonata. It is dark, mysterious a bit meloncholy but also has some inspiring lifts. The way you describe Fuji playing it in the fic was nice, not quite enough to move me to tears like Tezuka but close! (classical music will get me everytime... yup, I am a dork!)

The last line of Tezuka's with growing season not done yet was sweet. I like how you keep bringing back the metaphors and I really see them having to remind themselves to let go and trust one another and be able to tell each other that they are trying and that they are moving forward.

I Know that Fuji has never let anybody know him so well and into his life like he is doing with Tezuka but does he not notice the times when they act as though they are more then just good friends?

And I had to refrain myself from squeeing like a fangirl at the last few lines. Although I stil think it messed up my thinking patterns.

[arithion]

Moonlight sonata has to be one of my favourite pieces to play hehe... I find it rips you with it...

I think I actually might have made Fuji a little clueless lol, but he deals well enough with it hehe

[crypticmadness]

Hm, I feel guilty for not commenting until this chapter.... >>
Anyways, I absolutely adore the Moonlight Sonata part.<33 I haven't actually heard it (some pianist I am, eh?), but I will now. (Classical music bores me, so I do hope it's not one of those freakishly long ones that put me to sleep at times....)

I laughed when Fuji told Tezuka he was going to push him off the bed if Tezuka kicked him.(x I would have loved if that had happened.

Yeah, this is basically the perfect thing to read before I go to bed (actually, I'm just turning off the computer and reading a book, but still...).

I absolutely adore your Smiles. ^^

[arithion]

Thank you for commenting :) It's nice to know people actually still read this hehe.
Moonlight Sonata is a somewhat melancholy piece. It's only about 6 or 7 minutes long and as far as I've ever heard or played, only written for the piano. If you get a chance to hear it, and hear a good version of it, it's quite moving and really beautiful.

Again, thank you, and I'm glad you like it :)