Smile ... again...

[arithion]

Title: Smile: Warm Me
Author: Arithion
Rating: G
Genre: Angstish, bit of drama… um… yeah
Pairing: Kinda sorta almost TezxFuji
Chapter: Twelve
Summary: What’s behind a smile…?
Warning: Shonen ai, Cuteness, um… a small fight, mean Fuji, mean Tez, careing Fuji, needy Tez.

Comments

[yuki_scorpio]

I really want to beat Fuji up for being so nasty and inconsiderate in this part! But that's the way he is...... *grrrr*

*hugs Tez* If I were you, I'd have flipped. Love you so much!

I *love* the part where their arguement melts into something soft, and then Tezuka opens himself to Fuji. <3 <3 <3

Now what's gonna happen the next day? =D

[arithion]

no beating up my Fuji! It's just the way he is... you should love and care for him because he can't help it ;)

yeah um well... there was that tad pf violence because I felt like smashing my house guests through a wall, and it kinda bled over ;)

*snugs*

[moffit]

Enter the writing tensai, Arith, who manages to write even with other people peering over her shoulder! *cough*

I think you did okay. I like how you can have Fuji and Tezuka fight without anyone cluing in. And the hug when they got home was sweet. At first I thought it was going to get ugly with Tez pushing Fuji to the wall an all. The sweetness was a relief. The ending was warm; I like. ^^ *huggle*

[arithion]

/snort...
lol well... yeah.. something like that...

Glad you liked the warm ending hehe *hugs*

Thank you

[stardarkangel]

I'm amazed by your skills of slowly build the relationship from ground up. ^_^

Hi! Sorry, this is the first time I commented, but I've been following your story since the beginning. *still in awe* The tension and depth is great. I also loved your cactus symbolism. ^_^ It made me rush downstairs to spend extra time with the cactuses in my house. ^^;;

Your writing speed is crazy too. You write a _lot_ @___@. But it's a very good thing. ^^b

There has been a decrease in Tezufuji fics these days and since they are my OTP (Although I do still read Golden Pair etc etc..) I'm extremely greatful that you're writing this. ^__^ *beams*

Arigatou!

Re: Thank you

[arithion]

wow... *blush* um... thank you! And thank you for commenting!

awww... I just write when I get an idea, that's all. They're relatively short chapters... but thanks hehe

Glad you like the story... tezxfuji is slowly becoming my favourite pairing :)

[indirect]

Eeee! :bounces and luvs allllllll over this chapter: I love sleepy wakeup scenes with a passion that is probably disturbing.... Sleepy eyes... mmmmm....... :purrrrrrs: :eyes her repeating letters and grins sheepishly: Great chapter, chica... I loved the flow of this one and just.. ah... everything! ^___^

[arithion]

yay hehe soooo glad you liked it! I didnt get to concentrate on this one the way I usually do, so I was actually worried about it!

*snugs*

[indirect]

Sometimes the best bits of writing come out when you don't ahve the time to concentrate on it and just let yourself write it the way it came... At least that's what I find. This was a very nice chapter.. :hugs it then hugs you with a purrr:

[violetfury]

I liked it. ^_^ That's pretty cool of you to be able to write a chapter with annoying people around.

[arithion]

hehe *hugs* thanks... I was ready to commit homicide... but I think they got the hint when I almost slammed my keyboard keys through the desk with every word I typed lol

thanks for reading