Smile ... again...

Apr 09, 2004 22:26

Title: Smile: Warm Me
Author: Arithion
Rating: G
Genre: Angstish, bit of drama… um… yeah
Pairing: Kinda sorta almost TezxFuji
Chapter: Twelve
Summary: What’s behind a smile…?
Warning: Shonen ai, Cuteness, um… a small fight, mean Fuji, mean Tez, careing Fuji, needy Tez.

Smile: Warm Me )

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makikoigami April 12 2004, 15:33:28 UTC
*ist all teary eyed* Ya know... it's strange when you read about pairings you are planning to cosplay/identifiying with and they resemble you and your significant other more than you like to. *frowns* Ya don't really need to understand that though. ^^;

Thanks for giving me such a GREAT gift for my birthday (I found this story on the 11th, one day afterwards). I mean, I always look forward to new parts of this story, but this time... it was just a nice present. ^__^ Thanks!

“Weekend?” Brown eyes studied the prodigy thoughtfully.

“Still yours…” Opening his eyes a little, Fuji continued to smile, a mischievous gleam entering them. “You just have to… share.”This melted me, honestly. Completely and entirely. *nods* I admit I didn't quite get why exactly Tezuka was so phazed about Fuji and the whole evening, but I just plain the loved the scene you developed from it. *hearts* And I so damn want to know what Fuji has in mind for the upcoming day ( ... )

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arithion April 12 2004, 16:00:39 UTC
wow... so glad you liked it and so glad it was on your birthday! and HAPPY BIRTHDAY

oh Tezuka was phased because he'd said that he wanted the whole weekend to be just Fuji and himself. hehe

Next chapter is up if you're interested :)

*hugs* thanks for reading!

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fic_faery May 10 2004, 11:41:30 UTC
Oh poor Fuji trapped in a bed with Tezuka's arm around him... wait! Foolish boy. Don't escape. Enjoy the moment! It's nice to see how far Fuji has come with accepting human contact, at least when it comes to Tezuka.

Fuji got the distinct impression that Tezuka didn’t like to share Really Fuji what was your first clue. lol. Ok, probably wasn't meant to be that funny but I think it was one of my favourite lines. He goads Tezuka along and then feels like he doesn't like to share. He knew before he agreed that he wouldn't want to go. And this is why I love your Fuji, he likes to get inot mischief and torment those he knows.

Oh a petulant Tezuka is fun. I am a Child I had a flash of Ryoma saying that to the racket stringer for a second.

I was worried for a bit there with Tezuka pretty much man handling Fuji and questionging what Fun is. But then I wanted to hug him but Fuji beat me to it. “I enjoy you…” that was too sweet, such a simple sentence that speaks so much. Especially coming from someone like Tezuka who never seems to say ( ... )

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arithion May 10 2004, 12:17:00 UTC
This was actually one of my favourite chapters to write ... and I was actually proud of it once I finished lol... and that's a very rare thing for me to be

*hugs* Thankyou for liking the story so much :) Helps give me inspiration for the next chapter that is cruely teasing me atm hehe

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akizukikaoru December 9 2007, 08:43:41 UTC
I swear, if these two don't kick it up a notch, I'm never going to be able to sleep.

I'm loving every word of this. Can't wait to read the rest!

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simonon August 27 2008, 23:30:23 UTC
I'm bookmarking this for a sec because I've been reading off and on all day and hey, this is really awesome.

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arithion August 28 2008, 02:54:38 UTC
So glad you're liking it that much :)

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