and even more Smile!

[arithion]

And the Weekend continues...

Title: Smile: Picture Me
Author: Arithion
Rating: G
Genre: Angstish, bit of drama… um… yeah
Pairing: Kinda sorta almost TezxFuji
Chapter: Thirteen
Summary: What’s behind a smile…?
Dedication: to yuki_scorpio and she knows why...and much thanks to scimitarsmile for being her usual self
Warning: Shonen ai, Cuteness, um… more cuteness, fun, and

Comments

[kateriya]

the road to Rome was a two way street, one side had potholes, and the other was apparently still under construction.

loved this line. ^_______^

and woah. the research must have gone into that (unless photography is your own hobby as well XD). Tezuka trying his hand at something new is so....cute. sometimes you forget they are only 15.

[arithion]

YAY... someone else liked my line!!! *glomps*

*cough* I really liked that too lol... um should I say that about my own writing 0_0 ?

And yeah... the research/picking of one of my dear friends brains... was pretty hard to cram in lol. I have pages of information on it now and even went to websites to find the cameras I wanted to use LOL

If I write about something, I at least like having a basic knowledge of what I'm saying.

And I wanted to show that Tezuka is a child... you know? underneath it all, all that gruff exterior and the way he holds himself... there is still a boy. I sometimes regret just writing this in Fuji's pov... because I can't show Tez's motivations from his pov with that. But I hope the Fuji mode works well enough

*hugs* thanks for reading!

yay!

[stardarkangel]

^_^ Another timely update!

I'm amazed by the detail in which you went into for the photography development. Did you research? O_o Eeps.

I loved the cuddly beginning, it made me feel all warm and fuzzy. ^_^

Awaits the next chapter....

Re: yay!

[arithion]

hehe... timely... hope I can keep it up... but I post on my journal if I'm having RL interfere with my writing!

Yeah, I did research ... it's one of my vices... I don't like just pretending lol

hehe *hugs*

Thank you for reading!

[earethiel]

*am amazed at the details in which you write about photography*

you must've done extensive research...

anyway, *proceed and huggles fics* is it bad of me to ask for more actions in the next chapter? ^^;;

[arithion]

YAY, hassling one of my dearest net friends WORKED lol...

This chapter would have taken a lot longer had I not been able to pick her brains... but it was worth it... was a little difficult at first to incorporate everything... but it worked :)

*hugs* glad you liked it

And you can ask as much as you want, Yuki asks all the time /snicker

[nachtmusik]

I've only just gotten into the TeniPuri fandom, and while I liked the Tezu/Fuji pairing, this story has made me fall in love with it. Your characters are extremely well developed, and you don't hurry the pace along to get the story over with. I can't wait to read more. Do you have your other fics archived somewhere?

[arithion]

/snicker... love the icon... but it'll steal more than your sanity.. trust me on that. I've only been here about 11 weeks myself... writing for two months in it now LOL

It's taken over my life.

while I liked the Tezu/Fuji pairing, this story has made me fall in love with it

Wow *hugs*glomps* Thank you... soooo much. That sort of thing makes my day, you have no idea! um... excuse me while I blush and have no idea what to say.

About my fics... sadly my website is still under construction since pot fic plot bunnies took over my life, so my pot stuff is only really in my LJ memories, unless you didnt mean just PoT stuff?

Anyhu... welcome to the fandom... and THANK YOU again! :)

[nachtmusik]

PoT stuff is good, because it's my current obsession...but what other fandoms are you involved in? I'm mainly a GW and YYH girl...I'll have to check out your other stuff! And thanks for the warm welcome :) everyone is so nice here!

[arithion]

Oh :) Well.. I'm currently taking a break from GW... It got to a stage I wasn't having fun anymore...

Go here if you like... penname Arithkenshin. Makoto has most of my stuff up... I'm also archived at Zania's sweetly sour, but she doesnt have the old drafts of the stories I'm revising. If you see something in progress, it will get finished eventually... just might take a while

I warn you though... if you really want to read my GW stuff... it's a fair bit darker than what I write for PoT hehe. And Drive is pure horror, and my pride and joy lol. AUGH... I'm rambling!

And yeah... I adore the PoT fandom... it's so cuddly and warm!

*hugs*

[fic_faery]

“I’m going to show you how to make a second last for as close to eternity as possible.”
“You’ve discovered time travel?”

I love the way you use words to show us the deeper side of Fuji and then the comical side of Tezuka. It's one of the reasons I keep coming back to read more. Just to read the interaction and word play between the two.

It’s a moment that’s already gone, already passed, a moment that will never exist again. And you missed it...And that moment… just then, I now have… captured on film until the end of time… or the paper gets burned.” Fuji chuckledI like the talkative Fuji that is full of insights. And I love how Tezuka just doesn't get it until Fuji explains it in terms of tennis. I just pictured this really artsy person trying to explain a piece of art to a jock and them not getting it until it was all sports related... poor Tezuka. It's not his fault he's logical and can't grasp all the abstract concepts