Smile 16...

Apr 18, 2004 02:32

Title: Smile: Break Me
Author: Arithion
Disclaimer: If they were mine, the series wouldn’t just be implied shonen-ai in certain bits… trust me... not mine
Rating: G
Genre: Angstish, bit of drama… um… yeah
Pairing: None really, heavy Fuji/Tez friendship… imply all you want though…ok and I’m willing to admit shonen-ai hints too…*grumbles*
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yuki_scorpio April 17 2004, 17:41:17 UTC
;_; Not much Tezuka in this chapter... but oh well, I'm sure the wait will be worth it!!!

Poor Syusuke though... *sigh* but I can't blame Yuuta, the boy's only 13 and he probably doesn't understand his brother well enough :(

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arithion April 17 2004, 18:10:49 UTC
yeah... sorry... bit more Tez in next chapter *hugs*
This chapter was fairly important though, needed to happen.

and yeah, I don't blame Yuuta either.

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lina_lau April 17 2004, 17:41:41 UTC
*luffles chapter* I don't hate you for it~~! In fact, I love you, haha. *hugglesnuggleglomptackleywoo* Heh, it's great! You portray his emotions so very well. ^_^ Can't wait for the next one!

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arithion April 17 2004, 18:11:43 UTC
*snugs* :) Glad you liked it hon... 17 won't be long

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summertea April 17 2004, 17:50:13 UTC
;____;

And then he goes Tezuka's andtheyhavesex. *keff*

.____. Yuuta....

*huggles Syuusuke*

Really like the last part. ^_^

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arithion April 17 2004, 18:13:33 UTC
lol *hugs* hehe
Glad you liked it ...

17 coming shortly

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nachtmusik April 17 2004, 18:01:08 UTC
::sniffle:: the end brought tears to my eyes! uwahhh...I just love this story...can't get enough!

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arithion April 17 2004, 18:14:20 UTC
ooo, I teared someone up!!! cooooolness!!!

*snugs* 17 isnt too far away!

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violetfury April 17 2004, 19:16:36 UTC
I liked it even though Tezuka was hardly in it.
Fuji being ruthless is cool but too bad Yuuta didn't see it that way.

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arithion April 17 2004, 19:50:21 UTC
*hugs* thankee for still liking it... promise Tez makes a comeback hehe

and yeah... Yuuta was thankful... just annoyed at the way Fuji went about it...

Chapter 17 coming soon

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