..."When All Is Crumbling"...

Dec 07, 2012 23:40


Under Your Skin

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runningxisxlife January 4 2013, 23:48:58 UTC
Be careful about historical references on this one. If you post it, people probably won't notice, but if by any chance you want to send it to a publisher, you can get ripped to pieces.

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arizonasavannah January 8 2013, 01:26:43 UTC
My issue with the supernatural is that no one wants to accept a major city as a place of magic. With A Spark only works in Boston because its, well, Boston. So I made up a small town. My issue with this entire idea is that Vampire! Troy may be hot, but he's also cliche. Gabriella as a witch works for me, but aside from a few scenes, this entire story reads to me like a Vampire Diaries episode. It hasn't gone beyond simply writing out moments of my overactive imagination.

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