You do these intense stories well, especially when their careers are involved. There's a hint of "From Blood" in this, so if you do decide to post it, be careful not to overlap themes/ideas/story lines. This would be different than a lot of the stuff that's out there, and I think you would do well at pulling it off.
It shares similar ideas as From Blood as far as the whole rescue scenarios and emotional impacts. I did plan to reveal Gabriella's past right off the bat and it wasn't going to be as traumatic as From Blood. More like she made a choice to skip the Olympic trials for something she considered more important and missed her shot and is now trying to make it up to herself by following a path she likes to think is more worthy. My biggest obstacle with this story which is why is hasn't been developed beyond a few scenes is that in order for them not to be classmates in coast guard college, they have to either be student and instructor which I hate the idea of, or teammates past training. So that leaves all their interactions to be high adrenaline or slow.
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