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"Venomous Pt 4 - Anodyne" Rosie/Carter, Princess Protection Program - G

Feb 13, 2010 22:51

Title: Venomous Part 4 - Anodyne
Fandom: Princess Protection Program
Pairing: Carter/Rosie
Rating: G
Words: ~2300
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction, not intended for profit or offense. I own no rights to the subjects.
Summary: A snake bite has aggravated the already fragile relationship between tomboy Carter Mason and misplaced Princess ( Read more... )

fic: venomous, fiction, fandom: ppp, ship: rosie/carter

Comments 11

shadowluva February 14 2010, 16:29:15 UTC

Woo! Finally, an update! Carter's been so moody lately. :( anyway, is it wrong that I keep checking the comm to see whether you updated? Eheh. Enjoyed reading it. :)

arkeis07 February 18 2010, 20:33:09 UTC

I feel sooo bad for doing this to anyone who likes my story, because I know it frustrates the hell outta me when authors don't update. SO I'm working to finish this one as quick as I can, without compromising quality. And this'll be a learning experience to never post a multichapter without being several chapters into it already lol.

Thanks so much, I feel special :D I'm really glad you liked it.

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arkeis07 February 20 2010, 01:26:28 UTC

:3 I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading <3

bcrebel February 14 2010, 16:58:17 UTC

It's just one step forward a whole bunch back with these two isn't it? There was definitely a bit of progress in here for them, somewhere, but I can already see several chapters down the road when Rosie has to forcibly drag Carter kicking and screaming into a relationship.

I'm definitely still loving your take on Carter's dad. He just wants them both to be happy and they're making it so damn difficult, lol.

Excellent chapter, I WANTS MOAR!

(omg Michael Westen icon! I think I need to find one with Fiona and a large gun, or possibly something that explodes.)

:D

arkeis07 February 20 2010, 01:29:49 UTC

Indeed, that's definitely the nature of their relationship. I feel Carter is one to hesitate on letting people in, who aren't already her close family or friend(s). I'm really into Major Mason too. He's the most believable parent figure I've seen in awhile, in a Disney movie even though being a secret agent itself is highly unbelievable lol

My friend Justin, initiatesix made that icon for me! He got me into Burn Notice. I wish he was on LJ more nowadays, I have a feeling you two would get along ~fantastically.

Thanks for commenting! <3

emeralbade February 15 2010, 00:45:25 UTC

Even though Carter and Rosie's hot and cold relationship is incredibly frustrating, I love it. It's stays true to the movie, but your additions give insight to deeper feelings and it's amazing. Loved this chapter and I learned a new word, so thank you for that.
:)

arkeis07 February 20 2010, 01:32:55 UTC

That's exactly what I'm going for in this; I have to give explanations on why they went from "omg i hate you stupid princess stfu" to "omg let's be best friends and take me to your coronation on a faraway island and have lesbian tea parties and such" over the course of what I'm assuming was about 2-3 weeks. I have to, for my own sanity.

that movie just, ugh, it's written so awfully, waaaaay too many loopholes, I just ugh. It kills me

I like words! They make you seem so smart, especially when my math skills are quite dubious. /:

Thanks for commenting!

starstruck768 February 15 2010, 05:21:57 UTC

I have no idea why, but I think every chapter that you post on this fic is the last. So every time that I see a new one, I get really excited because I thought it was over. Don't ask me why this happens, but I guess it's okay because I enjoy my irrevocable excitment.

Long winded, unnecessary story put aside, I'm glad that Carter has sort of pulled that rather large stick from her ass. I adore how you follow the plot but add all of the scenes that SHOULD have been in the movie. I love the baby steps, but I also love that they're getting closer to you know, getting all hot and heavy and cute and stuff.

Genius, as always. I need to find a more creative way of telling you that you're my favorite. I'll work on that for the next chapter.

arkeis07 February 20 2010, 01:37:34 UTC

*gasp!* IT SHAN'T BE OVER UNTIL THE BAD MAN KANE IS RIGHTFULLY APPREHENDED AND THE TRUE RULER OF COSTA LUNA IS RECOGNIZED, AND THERE'S A PARADE AND STREAMERS AND DANCING IN THE STREETS AND CAKE. THERE MUST BE CAKE.

Anyway, yes. I'm just glad you've stuck with me for so long, I'm such a horrible awful terrible bad updater person D:

YOU MAKE ME BLUSH A DEEP CRIMSON OF JOY, THANK YOU. No really, thanks for reading <3