Fanfiction : Naruto - Melting Snow

[arrankaara]

Title: Melting Snow.
Type: Fanfiction : Naruto.
Prompt: naruino's 2006 NaruIno Xmas Xchange; 0ocheshirecato0's snowperson.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto and any of its characters. I'm just having fun making them do what I want them to.
Rating: PG15. Very safe, actually. XD
Word Count: 3,812 words.
Summary: Two different persons with two different sentiments towards

Comments

[doc_destructo]

Very nice! I kind of fits, the two of them being such distinctly different seasonal people. I liked the differing perspectives, though I think the story might flow better overall if you combined the Naruto section and the "relationship" section. That way we get the Ino part, an overview of her and Naruto's relationship ending with his feelings on snow, then moving onto the Yamanaka household. Also, the funny paranthetical asides will be less jarring. Still, a very cute tale of two conflicting personalities. ^_^

[0ocheshirecato0]

-squee!- NaruIno truly is love! Sorry it took me so long to read this. I've been so busy with schoolwork. ;_; But it was the best reprieve from studying for exams ever! Thank you! ^_______^

...OMG I just love his last line! "Stay with me and I'll keep you warm. That I promise you." -squeal- I loved it! <3