Comments | artemisrae: FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 34

artemisrae

FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 34

Jul 15, 2007 20:46

Title: Be Careful What You Wish For…
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 34. But it is hardly suitable for delicate boysPairing: Ed/Winry
Rating: K+
Notes: Written for 52_flavours . It seems most Ed/Winry writers tackle the subject of Ed and Winry dancing at a ball. This is my take on it: Ed might actually be justified in being a grumpy crank that refuses to ( Read more... )

fma, edxwinry, 52flavours

Comments 12

lyricnonsense July 16 2007, 05:03:22 UTC

Ooo, I like! Ed doesn't really seem the type to learn to dance beforehand, relying instead on his natural talent, and I can definitely see him cutting in in the heat of the moment because he got jealous. And the crushed toes was a great unexpected but logical conclusion.

Thanks for sharing!

artemisrae July 16 2007, 14:23:16 UTC

If there's one thing Ed is, it's completely predictable in his reactions - Roy totally only asked Winry just to get a rise out of Ed.

I'm glad you liked it! THank you for reading.

terracottabones July 16 2007, 05:32:33 UTC

That was so cute! It was so realistic - I could actually see that happening in the manga - but still incredibly fluffly. Excellent work on the sugar drive. My night just got better. ^__^

artemisrae July 16 2007, 14:47:21 UTC

I really do need to remember to note at the beginning of my stories - 99% of them are manga-verse (if for no other reason than I couldn't see anime!Winry dancing with Roy anywhere, and that would be the LEAST of my non-canon...ness,)

Anyway, thank you for reading! Fluff is good for the soul once in a while.

evil_little_dog July 16 2007, 11:43:32 UTC

Bwahahahaha, poor Winry. And oh, I could see this happening. Cute, logical conclusion.

artemisrae July 16 2007, 14:57:52 UTC

Poor Ed. Like I really need to aggravate his guilt complex even more.

I'm glad you liked it!

evil_little_dog July 16 2007, 19:39:35 UTC

Like I really need to aggravate his guilt complex even more.

But it's such fun!

artemisrae July 16 2007, 20:26:29 UTC

I KNOW! And he makes it so easy for me too! The tiniest little thing = Ed guilt. Hell, he probably feels guilty for being so easily guilt ridden. Who are we not to indulge?

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iavasechui July 18 2007, 18:26:02 UTC

^_^ So cute, and probably exactly what would happen in the lovely manga-verse.

artemisrae July 18 2007, 19:18:25 UTC

Thank you! I find that quite the compliment, seeing as I adore the manga so very much.

iavasechui July 19 2007, 00:21:14 UTC

Me too, absolutely the best ^_^