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artemisrae

FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 52

Sep 05, 2007 20:30

Title: Bid Me Hold My Peace
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 52. speechless with the memory of a drowned moon.
Pairing: Ed/Winry
Rating: K
Summary: Ed’s no poet, and he’s even worse at complimenting Winry.
Notes: Written for
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fma, edxwinry, 52flavours

Comments 22

evil_little_dog September 6 2007, 00:54:15 UTC

SMACK HIM, WINRY.

I love this. I love fall festivals and this just...tickles me to bits. *luv luv luv*

artemisrae September 6 2007, 01:09:47 UTC

SERIOUSLY. WHY DOES SHE PUT UP WITH IT?!

(Poor Ed. He really does have the soul of a romantic. Just not the voice.)

evil_little_dog September 6 2007, 11:22:39 UTC

SERIOUSLY. WHY DOES SHE PUT UP WITH IT?!

I'd have to say the challenge. I can't come up with any other reason.

(Poor Ed. He really does have the soul of a romantic. Just not the voice.)

*grsnkr* The immediate thought that ran through my head was, "Yeah, he keeps that in a jar, on his suitcase."

artemisrae September 6 2007, 21:23:23 UTC

LOL! He has to keep it somewhere that he can shove it away and ignore it. "TELL HER SHE LOOKS PRETTY! TELL HER YOU LOVE HER!" "SHUT UUUUUUP!"

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lyricnonsense September 6 2007, 04:24:48 UTC

*holds head in hands*
Ed, you fool. You poor, dumb fool.

But you know, it's fun to watch him squirm. Excellent, as always. :)

artemisrae September 6 2007, 21:26:20 UTC

HE'S SO CLOSE, ISN'T HE? That poor boy is so repressed. *sigh*

But I'm glad you liked it! I enjoy making Ed squirm.

terracottabones September 6 2007, 05:27:16 UTC

Oh gosh. So excellent! I love how the point is that Ed is not poetic, that he is so clumsy with things like that - and the sense that life is so very normal - and yet in the end, it is both poetic and extraordinary.

artemisrae September 6 2007, 21:32:07 UTC

Thank you! *beams* Like I said, I had originally started the story with a different ending in mind, and then it went off in its own direction once Al left to get the snowcones, and the next thing I knew I sat back and went "Wait... that makes sense. Let's keep it!" Oh Ed. He's so close! Someday, he'll get it right.

anonymous September 7 2007, 17:07:54 UTC

"You know, if you want to be alone with Winry, you could just ask me."

You deserve awards for the lines you give Al. But c'mon, Ed, get it together!

fairy_dogma September 7 2007, 17:10:28 UTC

Whoops, I didn't mean to put that in as anonymous, i thought i was signed in. *slaps self* I need more sleep.

artemisrae September 8 2007, 01:31:39 UTC

Al really is quite snarky, isn't he? Even in the series? I need someone to foil Ed's ridiculous flailiness.