FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 21

Oct 04, 2007 00:45

Title: Parent’s Teachings
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 21. the heart of a gypsy
Characters: Ed/Winry
Rating: K
Summary: Winry finds she has misunderstood Ed.
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lyricnonsense October 4 2007, 05:53:46 UTC
*giggle* I can't help but wonder if Edward's going to think these mood swings are because Winry's pregnant.

So cute, so sweet, so snuggly. And so perfectly fitting after evil_little_dog made me cry.

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evil_little_dog October 4 2007, 11:29:24 UTC
Turn about is fair play, Lyra. *weg*

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artemisrae October 4 2007, 18:50:41 UTC
*sigh* I don't know what to do with either one of you...

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evil_little_dog October 5 2007, 00:19:30 UTC
Hmmm. Well, I can think of a few ideas but they usually involved high voltage wires, car batteries and someone else's bank account. *nods*

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evil_little_dog October 4 2007, 11:30:19 UTC
Awww, good insight for Ed on Winry's part - and so sweet that he wants her to come with him on his journeys and asks her to come along.

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artemisrae October 4 2007, 18:52:21 UTC
Well Ed DOES like to travel, and in his mind, that's what couples in love DO. (And also I wanted to write something with Izumi and Sig, because I loooooove them so much. How come I never write them?)

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evil_little_dog October 5 2007, 00:20:19 UTC
Exactly! You don't leave someone behind, s/he comes along with! *grins* Good point, Ed.

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artemisrae October 5 2007, 00:48:31 UTC
Well SERIOUSLY, can you imagine Izumi without Sig? Heeeeeell no.

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opal_skies October 5 2007, 03:03:44 UTC
Aw. Sweet. The elements you put in are very clever. I actually shouted, "OHHHH! Ah-ha!" at the mention of the father-emulating bit. :P

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artemisrae October 6 2007, 01:55:54 UTC
Thank you! I noticed a lot of fics do that - hell, even I do that - turn Ed into this wandering soul with no interest in a home or family (when, really, I think that's what's at the heart of the entire series in the first place), so I kinda wanted to twist it around a little bit. Yes, he's a wandering soul, but only because he's emulating one of the healthy relationships he's been exposed to.

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dreamer1789 October 7 2007, 13:24:36 UTC
Interesting twists, I like this take. A sweet piece. :)

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artemisrae October 7 2007, 19:25:31 UTC
Thank you! I had wanted to twist the cliche around a little bit, so I'm happy it turned out well.

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fairy_dogma October 8 2007, 00:47:11 UTC
I get busy and can't check out the site for a few days, then come back and you've written tons. You know, Ed might be huge pain sometimes (although always adorable) but you have to give him props for dealing with Winry's moods.

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artemisrae October 8 2007, 23:47:44 UTC
I think he's drawn to them, for scientific reasons. It's like a big expiriment to him, to see what makes her tick.

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