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artemisrae

FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 6

Oct 21, 2007 20:47

Title: Where to Turn
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 6. a number, a letter/My love/I stand naked of my name/you are softwood and carbon/write me into being.
Pairing: Winry, Elric Brothers
Rating: K
Summary: Before Ed’s surgery, Winry and Al share a moment.
Notes: First of three updates for
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fma, trio, 52flavours

Comments 9

lyricnonsense October 22 2007, 01:15:58 UTC

Al couldn’t fix Ed yet, but Winry could complete him.
My favorite line. *wibbles*

You know, evil_little_dog and I were discussing how there was a severe drought of good Ed/Winry fic lately, and here you come to fix the problem. Yay!

artemisrae October 22 2007, 01:49:22 UTC

*shuffles foot* Awww shucks. Though god knows I certainly agree with you - especially considering where the manga is, you think people would be like, jumping on that bandwagon. *kicks fandom*

Hell, I'd be happy just with more gen fic with the trio. I love their friendship so muhc. SO MUCH.

evil_little_dog October 22 2007, 01:31:11 UTC

Oh, yay! More fic! Lyra pointed out that you had posted and I had to come running to check.

I love the idea that Winry designed Ed's automail all by herself - it's very in keeping with her and that Al would be the first person to see it.

artemisrae October 22 2007, 01:51:13 UTC

I've actually thought about this for a long time - by the time Ed needed automail it was pretty much assured she was becoming a mechanic, I can only imagine the way Ed's motivated her. (Why why why does fandom hate on their bond? I just dont get it!)

evil_little_dog October 22 2007, 11:20:59 UTC

Yup. I can see that explanation completely.

(Why why why does fandom hate on their bond? I just dont get it!)

I'd answer that but....

terracottabones October 22 2007, 04:54:56 UTC

A Divergence post and yours in the very same weekend! Truly a good weekend, if I do say so myself.

Very cute here - the picture of Winry sitting in her room at night, surrounded by papers and blushing with pride - it just seems so human to me. Nicely done.

artemisrae October 22 2007, 23:59:23 UTC

Thank you! (Gosh, putting me in the same category as Lyra, I'm blushing bright red over here.) Winry and Ed are so similar in that respect - you know Ed's pulled the same thing with the alchemy texts.

dreamer1789 October 27 2007, 20:11:47 UTC

Al couldn’t fix Ed yet, but Winry could complete him. ♥ ♥ ♥

Well, the whole piece was absolute love and spot on characterization, but that line took the crown. ^^

artemisrae October 28 2007, 02:21:10 UTC

*beam* Thank you! Characterization is always a big worry of mine, so I'm happy to hear you approve!