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artemisrae

FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 39

Oct 24, 2007 23:18

Title: The Gold Hind
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 39. Take aim like Artemis
Characters: Ed/Winry
Rating: K
Summary: Ed learns the value of knocking before he enters a room.
Notes: First of three updates for
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fma, edxwinry, 52flavours

Comments 31

yain_awai October 25 2007, 04:37:53 UTC

So you decided to do the greek mythology with FMA characters thing you mentioned before? That's awesome. I haven't read your other updates yet, but I think this one will be my favorite anyway.

yain_awai October 25 2007, 04:53:28 UTC

Oh, and I like your reference to the Golden Hind. Makes me giggle.

artemisrae October 25 2007, 22:23:38 UTC

Close but not exactly - this popped into my head once I saw the prompt, but I doubt that I'll do another one. Of course, I'm probably just saying that and will come up with something else a couple weeks from now...

But I'm glad you liked it - I completely adored Artemis when I took Latin class (I have NO IDEA why this is) so when juxtaposie suggested the title I think I squealed for joy.

lyricnonsense October 25 2007, 04:58:55 UTC

*giggle*

Much, much love. I love the retelling of the Artemis myth, and Winry really is rather merciful.

*giggle*

artemisrae October 25 2007, 22:24:58 UTC

*whistles innocently*

Winry is rather merciful because she honestly doesn't mind THAT much...

anonymous October 25 2007, 05:44:24 UTC

I like it. But, I mean, it's just like with the rest of FMA. If they were doing a serious part, a wrench to the head like that could KILL a man. But if it's Winry, it's just a bucket of lulz.

artemisrae October 25 2007, 22:25:17 UTC

Winry's rather talented that way, isn't she?

ear145 October 25 2007, 05:58:30 UTC

I'm glad Winry was more merciful than Artemis... ^^

Once again, awesome job!

artemisrae October 25 2007, 22:27:24 UTC

Thank you! I'm just glad Winry realizes that it was Ed and he IS kind of a moron so she can't be THAT mad...

terracottabones October 25 2007, 06:06:10 UTC

LOVE. Haha. I love the gradual addition of raunchiness into your fics. Yaaay raunchiness.

I love the setup here, too. Huntress Winry! I like that Ed doesn't get turned to a stag and devoured by hounds. It's a nice touch.

P.S. I meant to respond to the last fic of your last triple post...but somehow never got to it. Many apologies! Let me just say that it made my day better.

artemisrae October 25 2007, 22:30:01 UTC

I love the gradual addition of raunchiness into your fics.

TRUE FACT: I actually wrote the raunchier ones a while ago, back in like July, but didn't want to creep everyone out right out of the gate, so I built up to them. (And there may be one or two more coming...)

I'm glad you liked it! Winry doesn't need to turn Ed into a stag. She can maul him herself.