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artemisrae

FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 7

Oct 24, 2007 23:19

Title: Lesson to Learn
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 7. Approximately the same kind and density
Characters: Wrath, Roy, Riza, Elric Brothers, Winry
Rating: K
Summary: Men like Mustang and the Elric Brothers are all the same.
Notes: Second of three updates for
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royxriza, fma, edxwinry, 52flavours

Comments 13

yain_awai October 25 2007, 04:43:46 UTC

WOW. I hate this more than I hated chapter 56. That's a compliment. Rather, I hate Wrath more in your story than I did in chapter 56. A well written look into the coolly sadistic mind of Bradly. The detail of his own signature sealed the feeling of this piece, and cemented the dread and foreboding creeping up inside me for what action he takes next.

artemisrae October 25 2007, 22:40:03 UTC

Ahhaha. Thank you for the compliment! I really really really love Bradley - I can't wait to see more about him, seriously - especially with Riza. Man, I want to see how that plays out.

lyricnonsense October 25 2007, 05:02:38 UTC

*whimper*
So true, so true. Cold and calculated Wrath, spot-on characterization of the Elrics and Roy. And all done without Roy or the brothers actually appearing.

You're like the good Ed/Winry fic fix. Keeps me from sporking my brains out after venturing to FFN in desperation/withdrawal.

Why yes, I am a junkie and you are (one of) my supplier(s).

artemisrae October 25 2007, 22:44:13 UTC

HOMG you complimented my characterization. *blushes furiously* If there is one thing I'm super sensitive about, it's how the characters are perceived. (No, seriously, just ask Josie, poor girl hears so much whining on my end during the writing process...)

I am terribly embarrassed to be one of your suppliers - it speaks to the terribly sad state of fandom as far as Ed and Winry are concerned.

terracottabones October 25 2007, 06:34:02 UTC

Cute! Makes me happy. I love love. It's just...lovely. ^__^

artemisrae October 25 2007, 22:45:15 UTC

Thank you! It makes YOU happy, I'm not sure Ed and Al and Roy would agree...

evil_little_dog October 25 2007, 11:57:02 UTC

You just have to love the cool, calculating way that Bradley does things (even if you personally can't stand him). Yay for an exploration of the scene behind the scene and such creepy tingles I feel now....

artemisrae October 25 2007, 22:47:12 UTC

MAN I LOVE BRADLEY. A LOT. He's just awesome, and he gives me the opportunity to write creepy fic (which I love to write, and hardly ever get to...) and I really really want more scenes with him in the manga, interacting with the other homunculus.

evil_little_dog October 26 2007, 00:21:42 UTC

I personally prefer Bradley to Envy...until Envy's in its true form, that is. *grins*

all_who_i_am October 25 2007, 12:01:13 UTC

Wow, lovely fic! So rare to see manga!Wrath.

threaten to stain their vision of a glorious triumph with blood, and they were frightened into inaction

This sentence is pure genius. Call me evil, but I like when someone's pink and fluffy ideals are crushed by real true facts. (Since it means that their pink and fluffy ideas have flaws...). And I'm not evil :D I just like when people are not blinded by their personal ambitions and when they DO fully comprehend what they're doing and not just trying to fix their inner wounds.

artemisrae October 25 2007, 22:51:41 UTC

I totally adore Manga!Wrath and man I'd love to see more fic about him.

And thank you! I'd never point it out to them, but the Elrics and Roy are rather alike in that manner - absolutely no sacrifice (not that I'd WANT them to sacrifice Riza and Winry...) but you know. You're absolutely right.