FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 14

[artemisrae]

Title: Breaking Through
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 14. An aspiring villain from the start
Characters: Ed/Winry
Rating: K
Summary: Ed hated him the instant he laid eyes upon him.
Notes: Third of three updates for

Comments

[artemisrae]

Ah, thank you! I know a jealous Ed isn't anything new to fandom, so I'm glad you like it!

[yain_awai]

Oh, I LOVE the last bit here! I understand Winry, because I was in a similar situation recently. Life lesson- boys do NOT come visit you if they aren't interested in a date. Ed's reactions to him are great, and I like Ben's character. He is not an annoying OC, but he's not getting Winry, no way. This is SO CUTE!!! Very believable, as well. Good job.

[artemisrae]

Thank you! Poor Ben - here he thought he'd hit the jackpot, with a girlfriend who works in automail. He never realized he never had a chance, lol.

[lyricnonsense]

*dies laughing* Oh I love it. I love it. I love how clueless Winry is for once (been there!).

*wipes away tears of laughter* Oh Winry Winry Winry. So naive. Though I bet Ed feels good to be right for once. *grin*

This is another that gets added to memories. Great stuff.

[artemisrae]

I really had to give Ed the advantage for ONCE in my life. Poor boy probably cringes at the way I constantly emasculate him.

And god, you're making me blush over here. Thank you for the compliments!

[anonymous]

The only words appropriate for this are: O SHI-

[artemisrae]

Ed's certainly thinking it!

[ear145]

"oh"

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This is so full of amazing in-character humoury goodness that I'm laughing incoherently at my computer screen. Again.

You and your stories and made of undeniable win.

[artemisrae]

Oh you guys all make me blush - thank you! Honestly! You say things like that and it makes me want to skitter off and write more fic. *grin*