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artemisrae

FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 16

Oct 30, 2007 21:48

Title: Once the Foundation’s Cracked
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 16. Do not raise your voice against me, I am not afraid of you/anthem although the lyrics are still bleeding from the/bark of my sapless heart
Pairing: Winry, Elric Brothers
Rating: K
Summary: Winry learns to read the Elric Brothers.
Notes: First of three updates for
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fma, trio, gen, 52flavours

Comments 13

evil_little_dog October 31 2007, 02:08:44 UTC

AWWWWWWW.

artemisrae October 31 2007, 02:18:12 UTC

Well I figured, she goes from begging Riza not to take them away to waving them off half-awake. Something had to have happened there?

evil_little_dog October 31 2007, 11:27:48 UTC

*nod nod* Very good point.

ningicoco October 31 2007, 03:28:26 UTC

Awww... this was great. :)

artemisrae October 31 2007, 23:31:04 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

lyricnonsense October 31 2007, 04:18:30 UTC

Loved the way you slipped the earrings in there, and the reason for Winry's nonchalant goodbye.

This has been a good couple weeks for Ed/Winry fic, hasn't it?

artemisrae October 31 2007, 23:33:46 UTC

I had to - I figured there had to be something behind Winry's cool goodbye. Either the Elrics had worn her down or... she finally understood. I took the less callous of the two.

This has been a good couple weeks for Ed/Winry fic, hasn't it?

GOD I KNOW. And god, once a lot of fic comes out I want to stomp around and demand more and what are the chances that more is soon coming? *pout*

zuppi October 31 2007, 08:57:50 UTC

Eep! You totally broke me. ;_;

Oh God, I love it. Poor Winry! I just... god, I love this. It paints Winry so perfectly. I really like how you described her emotional state and reactions to the boys, especially that dense Ed.

This is so what I needed to brighten my day before work! :)

artemisrae October 31 2007, 23:35:04 UTC

Thank you! And... I apologize for breaking you? *wibble*

And Ed isn't dense! He just has... other things on his mind? (GOD he's SO DENSE. Stupid boy.)

zuppi October 31 2007, 23:52:09 UTC

I apologize for breaking you? *wibble*

My poor eggy self. :(

Oh dense Ed, never change. It's so amusing.

mulzrule November 2 2007, 02:24:03 UTC

*sniffles* Awe! If I were WInry I would really let those two have it one day.

artemisrae November 3 2007, 16:06:06 UTC

She really does need to, don't you think? Thank god she's so rather understanding when it comes to those dumb boys.

mulzrule November 4 2007, 00:25:04 UTC

Ed needs to pay her equivalent exchange.