FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 51

Oct 30, 2007 21:52

Title: Protect and Preserve
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 51. Why are men such fools they will not realize/the wisdom that is hidden behind those strange eyes?/And these wonderful people are you and I.
Pairing: Al, Ed/Winry
Rating: K
Summary: Ed is slow and Winry has a short temper, but Al will take care of them.
Notes: Third of three updates ( Read more... )

fma, trio, edxwinry, 52flavours

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evil_little_dog October 31 2007, 02:13:37 UTC
*SNICKER* Oh, Al. You are such a good brother. To everyone. (And a devil in disguise.)

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artemisrae October 31 2007, 02:20:45 UTC
I LOVE AL so much. It's the quiet ones you have to watch for - Al has a mischievous streak there that I love to exploit in fic.

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evil_little_dog October 31 2007, 11:30:06 UTC
Oh, me too. I wish he'd talk to me more. Specifically about my own fic.

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artemisrae November 1 2007, 00:13:45 UTC
UM I WISH HE WOULD TOO. GOD AL.

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sabssmith October 31 2007, 02:26:03 UTC
Heeheehee~ <3

I do love this one (new reader of yours, btw), and I especially enjoy how you write Al's character. Very IC, but very adorable~

I'm just wondering...what did Ed say/do that made him mess up? ;D
-curious-

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artemisrae November 1 2007, 00:14:57 UTC
*waves* I'm glad you like it! Al's such a little devil...

To be honest? I'm not sure exactly what Ed said. Winry was quickly placated though, so I imagine it wasn't too bad.

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lyricnonsense October 31 2007, 04:44:26 UTC
*grin* Al is a devious little guy. That's kind of why we love him.

But I seriously love how Al knows not only when to leave (or be asked to leave), but he also knows not to come back until they start fighting. Once he finishes fixing up Ed and Winry and Roy and Riza, that boy's going to break a lot of hearts. :)

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artemisrae November 1 2007, 00:18:23 UTC
But I seriously love how Al knows not only when to leave (or be asked to leave), but he also knows not to come back until they start fighting.

Just think of Al's education in How Not to Woo a Girl. He's learned much from Ed, who would be less than pleased to find that out.

And holy crap is Al going to be a heartbreaker. He's already broken my heart. Boy seriously needs to return to his body and get through puberty, stat.

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zuppi October 31 2007, 09:12:17 UTC
Muhahaha! Oh Ed, you massive dork. You totally hit the nail on the head with this one, well, for me anyway! This is exactly what I love about Ed/Winry. Ed is this brash, arrogant, confident guy about everything, but we get these little moments where that part of him cracks away and we get to see his more vulnerable side... and it's usually around Winry.

And I love Al here! He's so wise and cute and adorable and BRILLIANT!

I'm so glad I checked LJ this morning. I'm going to go off to work all smilie, happy and annoying, and I won't even need coffee! XD

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artemisrae November 1 2007, 00:22:21 UTC
Winry really is Ed's vulnerability, isn't she? And it's even worse, because Al knows them both better than they know themselves. *hearts all three*

I'm happy you checked LJ too! I aim to please!

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zuppi November 1 2007, 00:51:24 UTC
Lol, Al's definitely got them figured!

Would you mind if I friended you? I love your stuff and while reading through these fics on your journal, I noticed that you're an Avatar fan too. I'm starting to get madly obsessed with Tokka

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artemisrae November 1 2007, 01:24:22 UTC
I would love to be friends! AND YES. I need more Tokka friends! Tokka is pretty much my favorite ship ever to write, because they're so sarcastic and snarky and homg you know they'd have so much fun. YES.

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opal_skies November 1 2007, 01:04:22 UTC
Haha, that was adorable! Al is so like himself, as is Ed's awkwardness. ^_^

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artemisrae November 1 2007, 01:28:05 UTC
Thank you! Al has to be himself - someone needs to be the sane one in that little trio.

P.S. - MASSIVE icon love.

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opal_skies November 2 2007, 00:56:34 UTC
:D
Haha, thank you! It's from mata090680

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