FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 11

[artemisrae]

Title: With Devotion’s Visage
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 11. My lord, you called me. I come. What does the king command?
Pairing: Ed/Winry
Rating: K
Summary: Winry never does things the usual way. Ed’s sleeping suffers as a result.
Notes: First of three updates for

Comments

[rainbow_cnxn]

“Most women crave strange foods. My wife craves alloys.”

Ahahaha. You can definitely imagine this happening. They would make such a funny couple. And for being a stubborn jerk, Ed is pretty much a pushover for Winry. How can you not love them? :3

I always imagined him to be more irritable if woken up. I guess it's the Winry-effect acting.

[artemisrae]

I always imagined him to be more irritable if woken up.

What, you think this is the first time Ed's been woken up this way? LOL. I'm glad you liked it! They're so much fun to write, for those exact reasons - Ed'll pout and shout, but in the end he'll give Winry anything she wants.

[su_dama]

i luff this so. *heart melts* the whole family thing...it's too cute. and alloys. hahahaha. god, that's so true.

[artemisrae]

That was the exact reaction I was going for! I fail at writing something substansial, but meaningless fluff? Forget about it! I'm glad you liked it!

[terracottabones]

I love this one! It's great. And it's so perfect...everyone does a pregnant-Winry fic, and it's so hard to be break out of the mold - but you've done it! Nicely executed. I squirm with baby joy! :D

[artemisrae]

Ahh thank you! Believe me, I definitely struggled before I decided to give in and write it - I figured if I'm going to write them married, I might as well go all the way. I'm happy you approve!

[lyricnonsense]

“Most women crave strange foods. My wife craves alloys.”
*dies laughing* I LOVE THIS LINE.

I love how the tables have turned, and now it's Ed trying to keep Winry from doing stupid, potentially harmful things. How's that for payback, Edward?

So much cute, and so much funny. Love!

[artemisrae]

I love how the tables have turned, and now it's Ed trying to keep Winry from doing stupid, potentially harmful things.

Ed and Winry have very similar personalities. Winry just drives Ed crazy on a much smaller scale. (And he's not particularly pleased with the payback, even if the author is sufficiently amused.)

[littlemoonhime]

Loved this. Especially the last line. :)

[artemisrae]

Ah, thanks! It didn't occur to me right away - I actually thought of it right before I sent it to be beta'd. I'm glad you liked it!