FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 20

[artemisrae]

Title: Render Up Myself
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 20. New splendour to the dead.
Pairing: Ed/Winry, Greed, RanFan
Rating: K
Summary: The time for waiting is over and now it’s time for action.
Notes: Second of three updates for

Comments

[terracottabones]

So perfect. Dark, too...for a second I was worried that I'd missed a new FMA chapter. ^_^ It's so real!

[artemisrae]

*blush* I wish but holy cow the compliment is appreciated. And god, if what I came up with is considered good, I can't wait to see how Arakawa is going to actually blow us all away. (Seriously, is the next one out yet? *stamps feet*)

[lyricnonsense]

Oh, that was a switch. You do dark very VERY well. And the scene of Greed toying with Ranfan just breaks my heart. *sniffle*

[artemisrae]

Ah, thank you! I'll need to be able to write dark for what I'm currently planning, so I'm happy to hear you approve.

As for Greed and Ranfan, I have a feeling Arakawa is going to throw us a curveball there... I just can't wait to see it.

[zuppi]

Wow... I love this one. How did you capture the atmosphere so well in such a short piece. The image of Greed and Ran Fan fighting is utterly amazing. I really, really love this drabble. The emotion in it is so dark and real. Now you've got me longing for the next chapter of the manga already!!!

[artemisrae]

You're making me blush again - how do you always do that? I actually really really hope we get a real Greed/Ranfan fight in the manga, though I'm not sure which way Arakawa is going to go with it. All I know is that we need to see Ranfan again SOON my god.

[zuppi]

You're making me blush again - how do you always do that

Muhahaha! It's my secret X-Man power! XD

I'm dying to see the Green/Ran Fan show down. It will be epic. I'm really looking forward to seeing Ran Fan with automail too. That will rock!

[artemisrae]

AND THINK OF HOW BITTER ED WILL BE, that she beat his one year recovery time! I can't wait for THAT!

[evil_little_dog]

OoOooOo...Ed+Win, Greed and Ran Fan? Yay, that's a morning wake up for me. Love it. Poor Ran Fan.

[artemisrae]

I LOVE GREED SO MUCH. Why hasn't he been employed more? There should be more Greed! (And also I neeeeeeeed to know how Arakawa is going to resolve this story line. I have a feeling it'll break my heart...)

[evil_little_dog]

*nod nod nod*

I have a theory (I admit I stoled it from someone else but I luff it). I won't share, though, 'cause it'll be used inna story somewhere....

[dreamer1789]

“I don’t use the tools to crack just your skull, Edward,” XD You tell him, Winry!

Oh, the Ran Fan fighting Ling - that's just intense. Love the description on that part.

“She got tired of waiting, Ed,” What is it with you and superb closing lines? ;)

[artemisrae]

What is it with you and superb closing lines?

OH MY GOD it's actually SUPER ANNOYING because those closing lines pop into my head APROPOS OF NOTHING and then I have to poke and prod and figure out what the heck the context is and write the fic backwards.

But I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway! LOL.

[dreamer1789]

Ah, yes, that's a bit of a drawback. ^^ Could be worse: like having to start in the middle and asking the cast, 'uhm, okay guys, what happened before?' and the real pain in the behind, 'Will someone please tell me what happens after?' ^^; At least you know how it ends. ;)

[artemisrae]

...This is a good point. Being dropped into the middle of a story sucks too. I'm actually jealous of people who can sit and outline a story from beginning to end.