FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 32

[artemisrae]

Title: Perfection Not Required
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 32. Your kiss a city of stars
Pairing: Ed/Winry
Rating: K
Summary: Winry’s first kiss is memorable, but not for the reason she thinks.
Notes: Third of three updates for

Comments

[mulzrule]

These three updates were marvelous! I think the first one is my favorite. I have the feeling Arakawa is going to be mean. >_

[artemisrae]

GOD I REALLY HOPE SHE ISN'T. It'll destroy Ed if he breaks that promise.

I'm glad you liked my version of it though! LOL.

[pandoraculpa]

BWAAAA!!!

That's bloody brilliant! And it rings true; the two of them together always seem to create some kind of crazy, slapstick energy (except when it's angsty and sweet); I can imagine this scene with absolute clarity. Hilarious!

[artemisrae]

Ahh thank you! It's just... you know Ed. Things never go smoothly for him.

[lyricnonsense]

*dies laughing*

Ed really can't seem to get anything right the first time, can he? Well, at least Winry's got the right attitude. She saw stars and that's all that matters.

[artemisrae]

No, Ed can't get anything right because I'm terribly unnecessarily mean to him. It's out of love, I swear!

[terracottabones]

OMG I just die of butterflies when I read this! This is great! Fluff and luff and all the good things in between....oh so perfect. Love love love.

[evil_little_dog]

hahahahaah. Ed's going to think she's nuts, right? "C'mon, let's get some ice on that eye, it's gonna swell." (She's gonna kill me, she's gonna kill me...wait, she's laughing? Stars? WTH??!?)

[netta_sloan]

hahahha, I had the same thought. Awesome story!

[artemisrae]

Hee, thank you!

[artemisrae]

Ed already thought she was nuts, so it's basically a moot point ;-)