FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 38

[artemisrae]

Title: Take Your Time
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 38. This is not a pen for sheep./There are no separating distances here./This is love’s sanctuary.
Pairing: Ed/Winry
Rating: K
Summary: In the very beginning of their relationship, when things become Official, the workroom quickly became their favorite room in the house.
Notes: The other half

Comments

[zuppi]

I think we must have psychic-fic connection or something! I was actually thinking about this concept this week. I think it's really interesting how relationships progress from the initial awkward phase to where a couple are comfortable with each other. It's interesting how things change over time. Although it's nice being in a comfortable relationship, sometimes you can miss those 'oh my God, did he just try and hold my hand?! No, maybe it was an accident... or was it?! Squee!!!' moments from early in the relationship.

I really like how you've shown the progression for Ed and Winry here. It's sweet, cute and realistic and very in character for both of them. Damn, Ed/Winry is just so adorable!!! Why don't more people ship it?!

[artemisrae]

That is awesome! I would uh... totally still love to see what you got? Because there totaly needs to be more fic out there? *beams*

Those moments really are wonderful, aren't they? (I can think of a few choice ones that would make lovely fic if I ever wanted to...)

[zuppi]

Those moments really are wonderful, aren't they?

Haha! Yes, very much so. I'm looking on the bright side of spending two weeks on a rig in the middle of the desert... it will finally give me time to work on fics!

[mulzrule]

Awe, these are so sweet and fluffy. Merry Christmas, or whatever! :P

[artemisrae]

Merry Christmas to you too! I couldn't bring myself to bring the angst on the holidays. Not that I bring it all that often to begin with...

[azileea]

"Ed needed maintenance"
xD Precious.

[artemisrae]

Haha I'm glad you liked it!

[yain_awai]

Aww, great piece. Heheh, Ed's automail has never been in better working order. I was worried for the first two sentences, because I don't usually adore this style of perspective writing, but you pulled it all together so well that it's a beautiful narrative. Good job, again.

Merry Christmas! -<3

[artemisrae]

It's an interesting perspective to write from, and it's not something I usually touch, but I'm glad you like it - anything longer, I think and it might not have worked.

And I LOVE your icon! Do you make those?

[cornerofmadness]

aww that was sweet