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Puissance: Chapter Nineteen

Aug 14, 2012 00:13

Title: Puissance: Chapter Nineteen

Author: ArthurMerlin

Artist: blood_songs90

Pairings/characters: Arthur/Merlin (minor: OC/OC, Gwen/Lancelot)

Rating: PG-13

Word Count: 30,798

Warnings: None

Summary:The turbulent times of Prime Minister Arthur Pendragon, in which war looms, betrayal waits in the wings, and unexpected love blossoms.

Disclaimer: Neither ( Read more... )

fanfic, merlin/arthur

Comments 9

archaeologist_d August 14 2012, 12:52:30 UTC

I really liked all the political stuff, and how Mordred was able to invade so many countries so quickly. Good job with this!

arthurmerlin August 15 2012, 07:48:32 UTC

Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :-)

zairaalbereo August 15 2012, 07:25:33 UTC

This was a very interesting and unique story, though it was at times a bit confusing how you changed a lot of modern history, like eradicating the whole founding of the German republic and demolishing of the monarchy. I suppose in your version of events World War II did not happen either? Since NATO existed, though, it was a bit strange that the allies didn't declare war as soon as Turkey was occupied ( ... )

arthurmerlin August 15 2012, 07:48:15 UTC

Winston Churchill said that WW2 could have been avoided if the Hohenzollerns, Wittelsbachs, and Habsburgs had been allowed to retain their thrones… that idea has always fascinated me, probably because I’m a monarchist, but also because it makes a lot of sense to me! NATO would still exist, I think, because of the Russian east ( ... )

kcrd September 1 2012, 02:00:06 UTC

Loved your changed Europe history - that was quite unique! Thank you for sharing ( ... )

meta_foliate August 15 2012, 16:54:59 UTC

Aww...I feel bad saying this about a fic involving a potential world war...but awww! It was a lovely read.

I can't not say a word about the "love declaration" scene: you managed to capture Arthur's panic very well. It rang so true - at least to me.

P.S. I can only confirm there is indeed a Bavarian dialect/language, but alas I don't speak it.

goddessriss September 7 2012, 20:38:37 UTC

I really like this. Very plotty with a sweet little romance at the core. Good stuff; thank you for sharing. Do you have a PDF of this available? I'd love to be able to put this on my e-reader as I think it's one I'm going to come back to quite frequently!

legion11 September 15 2012, 21:12:04 UTC

Please, please, please, do you have a PDF? Please?