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Sex Pistol, Chapter Fifteen

Oct 02, 2011 10:46

Title: Sex Pistol, Chapter 15
Genre: AU (Non Magic), Romance/Humour and MWPP
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters/ Pairing: Remus Lupin/ Sirius Black, Lily Evans/ James Potter, Dorcas Meadows, Alice Mayapple, Peter Pettigrew, OCs
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None
Summary: Punk guitarist Remus Lupin was never a big fan of the popular band The Marauders, but with a ( Read more... )

fanfic, james potter, harry potter, peter pettigrew, oc, dorcas meadows, sex pistol, alice mayapple, sirius black, remus lupin, lily evans

Comments 7

starlite_gone October 7 2011, 06:24:14 UTC

I just started reading this fic and I really like it! I like the progression of Remus and Sirius from that first chapter, particularly Remus who was really aggressive to this last scene where he actually blushed. I also enjoy how everyone takes things so much in stride, minimizing on the drama and then how you juxtapose that with all the drama that Rita Skeeter and the tabloids create for them. I like how you have all the little excerpts from articles and interviews and the like, too-- it's really cool and it makes it feel more real ( ... )

artificial_ink October 12 2011, 14:16:40 UTC

Aww, long comments are fine. It's nice to see someone put effort and thought behind a comment when I put so much effort and thought into the chapters. :) I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far as well as the character development. I wanted it to seem as realistic as possible so it's great to hear that it seems such to others.
And don't worry about not having chapter! Another one should be out...soonish. Hopefully. I'll try to get as much done as possible before this show I'm working on in real life actually gears up and I have no time for anything. I think I've got maybe 5 Chapters max left of SP. Yeah, it's ending soon but maybe I might write one offs in this universe after. I was thinking maybe a Frank and Alice follow up or snap shots in the life of Remus and Sirius.
Thanks for reading lovely!

starlite_gone October 13 2011, 04:00:43 UTC

So I'm saying this not knowing what the ending will be -- but I think snapshots of their life would be fun. It's always nice to get to the end of a story but then also there are times it's like "But I want to know more!" so oneshots can be entertaining or interesting sometimes, for things that couldn't be covered in story.

You'd better be writing a chapter right now! *stares at you over your shoulder*

;p

theaeblackthorn October 15 2011, 11:44:33 UTC

asdfghjkl I have just read this fic and oh my god. Um. I am never the most articulate of people but negl, this is pretty epic. I'm useless at long comments, but thought a short, 'oh god this was awesome' would be better than nothing :)

artificial_ink October 20 2011, 04:28:45 UTC

Aw thanks! Happy to hear you enjoyed it so far! Articulation or not :)

lilitandaily October 21 2011, 07:38:26 UTC

I so adore this fic. ^^ I left a comment on your last chapter, but now I'm leaving another one, since I pretty much love everything you write. Remus/Sirius is fantastic, and I love the characterization and the plot of this whole fic. It's really coming along nicely, and is funny and just so interesting to think about how the Marauders we know and love would've turned out with the childhoods you created for them, and what would've been different. (Such as, James, Peter, and Sirius would've gotten in a lot more trouble without their usual mild-mannered Remus to temper them out.) Remus's childhood was actually very sad...He never really gets a happy background, does he. :'D But it was so interesting to read about him being shy and smart until he fell in with a certain crowd and dropped out. Little Remy getting corrupted.

I love pretty much this entire thing. Mhm.

annaskyfox October 24 2011, 22:03:04 UTC

Please post again for this story soon. I love so many things about it I can't even begin to list them. But I will try. I love Remus being a badass. I love the more periphery characters (alice and frank, as well as Kingsley are special favorites). I love the development of Remus and Sirius' relationship. I love how sweet and also so f you about other people (ie the press) being up in his business while also so scared and so in love sirius is. I love love love badass lily and James. I love the dialogue (quite masterful really). And of course i love the steamy sex. I love love that it's all punk rock and rock n roll and awesome tattoos and blue hair and chains and handcuffs and electric guitars and it makes me want to draw really really bad ( ... )