Caged

[artist_luver]

I've been working on work and finally some personal pieces.

...

well, actually one piece so far. but the new year JUST started so... there!

^_^;

Comments

[chiaki777]

hey, good job ^_^ if you want pointers, I might have a few, but I saw the "discouraged" bit, so I held my mouth shut :P

[artist_luver]

I put up the 'discouraged' critiques because it was a gift art at DA. here, in LJ, feel free to comment. i'd love to immprove. and its hard to find people to give good critisisim. :)

TY!

[chiaki777]

I feel that you tried to add too much detail to the grass. I see individual blades all the way to the back of the picture. You start to gloss over, which is nice, but by the size of the cage, and the angle it sits on the grass, the wall seems very close in this case.

To lose the illusion that the wall is so close, I would have made the grass a wavy blur of green with no distinguishable line of individual blades at the end. perhaps, then, it will keep to scale with the rest of the lawn.

That's my guess.

[artist_luver]

that's very good advice! thank you for pointing it out. i kept looking at it wondering what the heck was wrong with the pic. then you mention the grass.... you are right!

thanks!

[countquestions]

Very aptly named. Very sweet and sorta humbly victorious. Keep it up! :)

[artist_luver]

ty! it took a while... i rarely draw backgrounds (i need to practice more...) ^^;

[spriksie]

I love this. I'd make it my desktop.

[spriksie]

Actually, I just did. Hope you don't mind. :-)

[artist_luver]

oh wow! i don't mind at all! thanks!

[prettygirl2424]

I love her position in the cage and the way you created the marble too :)

Excellent job!

Oh and if you want I have new pictures up you are welcome to look at!

<3 Ash

[artist_luver]

oh! i'll definetely check out your new pictures! Thanks for letting me know!