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artsmystery

DID

Oct 20, 2004 13:31

Did you find me there ( Read more... )

Comments 5

heartache_scene October 20 2004, 15:16:39 UTC

this seems different from your usual style in some way... any new poetic influences?

Not really artsmystery October 20 2004, 22:29:06 UTC

No, unless my lit class is rubbing on me and I didn't know it....I tried to make it different, but in a style I had not really seen. Who knows...its all been done Im sure. I am sure there are some new poetic influences, but I would have no idea who they are. Love you!

Abner

Re: Not really heartache_scene October 21 2004, 22:30:40 UTC

hey, sorry i didn't say i loved the poem.

here's your comment you wanted! theskiesble3d October 21 2004, 13:02:00 UTC

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that's absolutely beautiful<3
i love it. it rolls off the tongue/brain (since i didn't speak it aloud, just inside my head) and i love that.

<3
exohexoh, Kristi

underanumbrella October 22 2004, 00:12:39 UTC

The structure may be different, but I find the wording to be "your style" - lots of dark internal rhymes.

"The Torn are here to regain their thrown"
Is it supposed to be spelled as "thrown" (rather than "throne")? If so, good play on words.

I adore it.