Arrival of the Sword

[artsmystery]

THE ARRIVAL OF THE SWORD

Comments

[queen_of_kings]

I enjoyed this very much. I actually laughed at the end of it. :) I like the line that says "bleed, bleed to be seen" I think that pretty much says it all.

[heartache_scene]

lol... too great.. drama queen.. HAHAHA. I LOVE U!!

[underanumbrella]

This is very good. I wish I could be so "poetic" in my poetry. The line "NO, I if any deserve the pain" makes me feel guilty because it sounds like a response. Reveal to me the subject.

Nothing to Worry About

[artsmystery]

First of all, Marni, you are amazingly poetic. Second, of all, it is most definitely not about you or a respondse to your previous poem. Not in the least. So, do not feel guilty at all. Keep up your amazing writings. Cheers and love to all.

~Abner

Re: Nothing to Worry About

[underanumbrella]

Thank you for easing my mind. I had to make sure, because I would never want to hurt your feelings in the least. You are so good to me.

Re: SPELLING

[artsmystery]

Please to do not pay attention to the retardedness of the incorrect spelling of the word response in the above comment I left. Gracias.

Abner

[1onelinedrawing]

on the way to paragould on saturday... I read the GCT sign and it said they were having a Lil Abner contest...... just made me think about it when u put ~abner...... Maybe u should be in the contest hehe... ok neway.... have a great day........-whitney

[hmmmxyeah]

I love it - so true about so many people. I have a friend who is always miserable in spurts. One day - down in the dumps - the next like nothing ever happened. I wonder if it is all real or like you say - just for attention. People kill me. You write the greatest stuff! <3