Whoo...that's a sizzling piece of work you got here! :)
I liked the bantering back and forth...and it sure as hell felt like Bruce was drunk, cause his thought pattern was EVERYWHERE! :D Shoot, I felt drunk for a moment.
This was a nice first story, especially since English isn't your first language! :) I hope you write more!
(I'll Private message you a little later. It's bedtime here! XD )
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Very hot little number here. You should post a link to it on worlds_finest (Just remember to member lock it if you do, for the sexy times.)
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I liked the bantering back and forth...and it sure as hell felt like Bruce was drunk, cause his thought pattern was EVERYWHERE! :D Shoot, I felt drunk for a moment.
This was a nice first story, especially since English isn't your first language! :) I hope you write more!
(I'll Private message you a little later. It's bedtime here! XD )
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Thank you for sharing! :)
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