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asakochan

Secrets Should Be Told (1/?) Start Saying Your Farewells

Sep 12, 2009 00:20

Story Title: Secrets should be told
Chapter Title: Start saying your farewells
Fandom: Star Trek XI, DOOM, Chronicles of Riddick
Pairings: Reaper!Bones/Kirk, Sulu/Chekov, Spock/Uhura, Scotty/Enterprise
Rated: T, overall R (For sexytimes)
Disclaimer: I do not own Star Trek or it's actors. But they have made residence in my mind and make my life ( Read more... )

star trek, reaper!bones/kirk, mccoy/kirk, chronicles of riddick, doom, series 1

Comments 30

scotchsour September 13 2009, 00:53:55 UTC

I really like the ReaperBones a lot and it is exciting part one. However, I'm having trouble with the logic. If this is something secretive or official to Dr. McCoy then the message would of gone through to his office or first to Jim and Spock and even then it goes to Jim's office and McCoy comes up to his office and you still get Jim's and Spock's reaction. Then it would sounded more surprising as McCoy simply came out of the office,told Chekov in his most doctory manner to move over and put the coordinates in himself.

Nevertheless I am enjoying it as I do see where you wanted drama and tension to go so I can't wait to see what happens next.

asakochan September 13 2009, 02:49:13 UTC

... I like your thinking. xD Well, I wanted it like that for a reason, but my beta says that my idea is quite complicated so we are thinking of changing it. ... YAY! We just got an idea! You will see later on as the story progresses.

Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

...P.S. If you have any ideas for the story please don't hesitate to say it. I like peoples input.

k_e_wilson September 13 2009, 03:00:28 UTC

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asakochan September 13 2009, 05:52:52 UTC

... Darn it I knew I should have checked it in triplicate... Or would it have been the 4th time? @.@ Thanks for the catch.

I hope it's to your taste! (Because mine is very weird)

k_e_wilson September 13 2009, 20:51:02 UTC

My mistake. God, I even checked over that one multiple times! D:

pixelmayhem September 13 2009, 05:56:04 UTC

Oh yes! A very interesting start. I like the mystery surrounding everything and how of course we know what's going on so the mystery is partially unveiled to us and still slightly unveiled for the crew. Looking forward to more.

asakochan September 14 2009, 03:45:27 UTC

I like to mess with their minds. You have to have some type of confusion in a story. I mean, There was confusion in Doom! There has to be some in the fic too.

Thank you so much! x3

siluria September 13 2009, 14:08:43 UTC

Nicely done!!! :) I really love Reaper fic, and I like the characterisation in this, especially the scene in the diner. I shall be eagerly looking out for more!!

asakochan September 14 2009, 03:46:45 UTC

I will try to make my Muse work faster. ^^

Thanks for reading and liking it!