{foreign territory - pt. 1}

[ascoliasm]

title: Foreign Territory - Part 1 of 2 or 3.
author: ascoliasm
pairing: hankyung/kibum {friendship}
rating: pg-13
genre: i never know.
summary: Chinese package named Hankyung gets flown to Seoul, no Korean included. Kibum is quietly racist. Heechul is the flatmate in the middle, kind of like a mediator, but for the living.
a/n: for the 100 super junior fics

Comments

[followurdestiny]

I'm liking your writing style and the dialogues, eventhough Kibum is kind of OOC *hits him over the head*...curious how this will develop...♥fighting!

[ascoliasm]

i need to watch myself some kibum videos because i write him in a fic again.

thanks for commenting :)

[baby_buggs]

wait....*looks back*...oh there's more!!! *celebrates*

i wonder how everything will happen....will Kibum be unracist???

[ascoliasm]

if he's not, i'll slap him back to america. and then apologise for it.

[volatileflame]

i like this : )

[ascoliasm]

i like your comment :)

[ascoliasm]

i know right, OOC kibum is such a party pooper :(

i am beaming at your icon because hanchul is like my oxygen. they are fantastic and i hope they get married.

thanks for reading ♥

[ascoliasm]

): Kibum might jump off the top of a tall building. i think we need to call for an intervention.

i hope they make attractive hanchul babies |D

[zhenli]

why don't you just kill me? this was fantastic, really. your dialogue is just... beautiful. and although kibum has completely lost his mind (and is OOC), i don't even care. because this was like a little magic gift-- in a sad, confusing way.

i have no idea why, but this struck a cord with me. i guess because i can never understand people's whole "only13"/"against chinese"... like the time heechul beat up those kids who made fun of geng. now i'm babbling, but... this is fantastic. i can't wait for more, and will be meming this, a-sap.

While he's completely prepared and unfazed by the prospect of a new flatmate for however long he stays, he's not so completely prepared when his new flatmate is delivered to his door, wrapped in Chinese.
um... love.

while Heechul seems to find it terribly amusing
oh heechul... (sigh) typical.

anyways, you're terribly good at writing, and it makes me a bit jealous, and again. i love the story so far, (beams)

[ascoliasm]

because if i killed you you'd be dead ):

i'm completely butchering kibum as a character, i know. I didn't really pay much attention to him apart from the bits in full house but that wasn't nearly enough. curse my bias ;-;

racism really makes me angry, so in my mind i like, married heechul when i saw the video of that radio interview with heechul. i thought it was the best thing ever

thanks for reading, and again for commenting ♥

[ascoliasm]

oh my god, i just realised who you are are.

i am totally head over heels in love with your 'lowering standards' fic. usually i'm not into the gun+mafia thing but the way you wrote it is absolutely divine.

i never commented ;-; but oh my goodness ilu so much.

[zhenli]

(hides), really? you're making my ego grow, xD

i don't mind that you haven't commented, i just like to hear that you like it so much. and it's a greater complimant knowing you don't typically read those kinds of fics. =P

and thank you so much. this comment made me coo in happiness, seriously. and it's not even on my fic, haha.

anyways, again, i'm in love with your writing, and i'm keeping my eye out for your writing from now on! ^^