Comments | ascoliasm: {absolute perfection}

ascoliasm

{absolute perfection}

Aug 15, 2009 23:02

( Heechul doesn’t even have to come to a conclusion to know that only idiots pity themselves. )

genre: inner monologue, characters: heechul, oneshot, super junior, pg-13

Comments 5

theblobmaster August 15 2009, 14:07:59 UTC

This was really good!
So well written! I'm usually not into stuff like this, but this was fantastic!
It could really seem real, it's just good ^^

ascoliasm August 16 2009, 11:58:03 UTC

:D My first fic, so I'm glad it didn't burn your eyes out. Thanks for reading <3

darleenk August 15 2009, 18:45:24 UTC

I really loved this; it was so realistic and emotional. I just felt the conflict inside him ):

♥

ascoliasm August 16 2009, 12:03:05 UTC

I thought it was bland :( Heechul was going to be more angry!Heechul and then it dwindled into nothingness and morphed into something like quiet angst by the time i was done.

Thanks for reading+commenting <3

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ascoliasm August 16 2009, 12:01:30 UTC

I had this sinking feeling when I was writing that the entire thing was going to be fail and sound like a Jessica Simpson inner monologue but it's good to see you don't think so :)

Thanks for commenting <3