i know you don't really know me, and probably arn't putting this up for praise or critisim... but i'd like to say that you have got some talent here. a strong stylist voice and an interesting story hook, but you are in sore need of a proof reader and/or editor. this is a good start.
awesome, glad it is interesting. Yeah spelling and grammer have always been a weak spot of mine. Also I love critisimn it is pretty much the only way to know how you are doing.
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