This was quite good. And I'm not just saying that! Alec felt vaguely John Sheppardesque I think. Possibly I'm projecting though since the last fic I read was SGA ( John had amnesia).
One thing that totally stood out for me was the organ bin punishment. That felt fresh and not overused.
My only qualm is that perhaps "therapy" at the end should be replaced with something else. "Treatment" or "examination" perhaps? I do not know.
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This was quite good. And I'm not just saying that! Alec felt vaguely John Sheppardesque I think. Possibly I'm projecting though since the last fic I read was SGA ( John had amnesia).
One thing that totally stood out for me was the organ bin punishment. That felt fresh and not overused.
My only qualm is that perhaps "therapy" at the end should be replaced with something else. "Treatment" or "examination" perhaps? I do not know.
Congratulations, my lovely! XOXO
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Now write me Rome fic? :D
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Of course not. *Goes to check ending* Um, maybe a little?
It wasn't really what I was originally thinking when I started writing it.
This was quite good. And I'm not just saying that! Alec felt vaguely John Sheppardesque I think.
I'm so flattered! *hearts you and Sheppard both*
One thing that totally stood out for me was the organ bin punishment. That felt fresh and not overused.
Yeah, I figured it wasn't completely out of the realm of possibility.
I shall work on the therapy word choice before I X-post it.
Thank you, my dear!
You are the bestest twin ever!
Cookies for you!
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Do you MEAN IT? *Holds hands tight*
These look interesting!
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