Brick by Brick 6/?

[ashbear02]

Title: Brick by Brick 6/?
Fandom: NCIS
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2795
Warnings: Major Angst
Authors Note: Alright, have you ever had one of those chapters in a fic that you write. Then delete, then rewrite again? This was one of those chapters for me.Gibbs, Tony and I went a few rounds on how this would go; and in the end I think it came out okay. SO,

Comments

[adafrog]

But the lock didn't help to keep the whore out when you let her in, you dumbfuck.
Good story. I'm glad it's not an easy fix.

[edioval]

I just read this story after it was rec'd on one of my lists, and I am totally hooked on it. I am so glad you're taking your time and really filling in these chapters (easy for me to say since I got to feast on six chapters today!). I don't know what the previous incarnations of Chapter 6 looked like, but this version is meaty, and deep, and so good. I don't often read WIPs, I like to read the whole story at once and send comments, but I'm making an exception. I've enjoyed each chapter. One part, chapter 3 or 4, sticks out in my mind; Tony recognizing that Jimmy has his back, and the angst that it isn't Gibbs. I also love you giving Palmer so much strength and depth. I'm off to see if you have other stories! Thanks for sharing your talent.
Elaine

[murgy31]

Yay! I loved this! Gibbs still has a lot of making up to do, but things are looking better for our boys.... Fantastic Job!

[wrtr_aka_wmgrg]

Sigh ... another excellent fic -- and I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter of it. :)

[21jsmcquaids]

please update soon