Comments | ashdo: Don't you want me baby ? Chapter 2, part II

ashdo

Don't you want me baby ? Chapter 2, part II

May 02, 2011 10:14

Maybe Santana should have stayed. This is very awkward now. When she was still here, I just had to behave, I had no other choice. It was simple. Nothing could happen. Now, I'm not so sure. All I can focus on is my shallow breathing, her own breathing. I feel oppressed. Just go to sleep Fabray, just stop thinking…

"Quinn ?" she whispers behind me. ( Read more... )

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alw_123 May 2 2011, 15:08:33 UTC

Oh JESUS!! I FREAKING LOVE THIS!! Please update soon!! I want to see how this all turns out

ashdo May 2 2011, 15:13:55 UTC

YAY !!! so so glad you "freaking love" it :D

cranberry_pi May 2 2011, 15:52:52 UTC

More! More! More! More! More! More!

In case I wasn't making it clear, I adored this! I love Santana and her gaydar, and Quinn's mini-meltdown that Rachel helps her through. I love Rachel's talking too much, and complaining about the air conditioning, and I love everything about Quinn! This was awesome, and I definitely want more! :)

ashdo May 2 2011, 15:54:55 UTC

OMG *blushes*... thank you so much !

ext_257365 May 2 2011, 17:15:39 UTC

Oh for sure continue...this is so sweet!!! Santana is spot on character and I love how you are writing Quinn and Rachel.

ashdo May 2 2011, 17:45:41 UTC

thanks a lot :D

broadwayboundkc May 2 2011, 17:53:59 UTC

I Freaking loved this so much! Absolutely brilliant can not wait for the next one please please please update asap!!

ashdo May 2 2011, 19:32:16 UTC

Thank you so much for commenting. I'm so glad you think it's brilliant :D, that means a lot !

endlessmotion May 2 2011, 19:24:35 UTC

Santana is AWESOME! LMAO!

This whole story is, and I am so glad you decided to continue. It was all so sweet and hot and fluffy and... and... I love it! Planning on writing a bit more? Please? Pretty please?

Btw, my favorite scene is by far when Quinn starts to cry and Rachel just asks her if she likes someone else and Quinn nods. Quinn is saying so much without a single word. Some powerful paragraph! =)

ashdo May 2 2011, 19:31:13 UTC

Wow, Thank you so much, I'm so happy to hear that :D
haha I'm all for "hot" and "sweet" and "fluffy" too ^^

I'm glad you think I was able to convey Quinn's feelings without a word :). haha Rachel was witty enough to understand the inner thoughts.

maybe I'll write more. I don't know yet. Some kind of epilogue maybe ? I'm quite bad with long multi-chaptered fics. I tend to NEVER ends them.