Comments | ashesfor_trees: heroes: "more than a bird," nathan petrelli

ashesfor_trees

heroes: "more than a bird," nathan petrelli

Feb 16, 2009 23:38

"More than a Bird"
Heroes, Nathan Petrelli.
Rated PG-13. 276 words.
Summary: Is it a bird? A plane? No, it's just another hero with clipped wings, bagged and tagged by the government.

Written for the heroes_contest "Freedom" drabble challenge.

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( Flight was supposed to mean freedom. )

fanfiction, tv: heroes

Comments 5

ibonekoen February 17 2009, 06:02:50 UTC

Ooh, very nicely done! Poignant and bittersweet, especially the last few lines.

ashesfor_trees February 17 2009, 06:15:56 UTC

:) thanks! I like this one, even though I rarely write the Petrelli's (give me Sylar any day of the week!) but Nathan just jumped out at me, haha.

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ashesfor_trees February 17 2009, 13:44:45 UTC

thank you! I had a lot of fun with this one :)

boombangbing February 28 2009, 14:40:28 UTC

Oh, this is great. I particularly like the 'wreckage of his life' line. It's nice to see a side of him that knows what a mess he's in, instead of what the show's giving us right now.

shaun_duckie February 28 2009, 17:54:28 UTC

"After all, even caged birds sing."
thats my fav line :D
i loved this!