Diabolos

Jun 21, 2008 00:09

Title : Diabolos Chapter 8
Pairing : Ryo x Ohkura
Genre : I refuse to slap a label on this fic
Rating : R
Summary : Psycho!Ohkura with a God Complex. Ryo the unwilling accomplice fighting a losing battle against his conscience. And their twisted relationship you can either see as self-inflicted torture or a warped kind of love.
A/N : I attempted ( Read more... )

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meronpan June 21 2008, 06:27:05 UTC
I really love the last line.
I find Psychotic Ohkura gorgeous for some reason.

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ashesof_hope June 22 2008, 09:25:27 UTC
I find him gorgeous when he's being all intense behind the drums so yes psycho!Ohkura is pretty awesome. :)

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ironicdawn June 21 2008, 10:18:24 UTC
Ahh I've missed seeing your updates!! I squeaked when I saw you update and for once I wasn't in the library XDD so I could read your posts with leisure!

I honestly don't have much stomach for blood and violence and the way you write this fic is incredibly haunting so often it takes a little guts for me to read your darker fics like this one. But as per usual you write it so well, one can't help but read it anyway! XD;;

I actually really love the plot in this fic; your characters are so complicated and have so much depth it's great! I love how you write that fine line between love and hate, love and lust, fear and awe so beautifully. Ryo's self-loathing entangled endlessly in his fear, hate, but also a desire for Ohkura. And Ohkura trying to convince himself that Ryo is nothing more than just a challenge that's keeping him interested. I find myself fearing for Uchi...

It's so good to see you update and a fantastic job as per usual! ^o^//

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ashesof_hope June 22 2008, 09:28:03 UTC
Too long since I updated. No words popping into my head. ): I'm so surprised u read this one tho, lol, I've always thought u preferred the angsty, or the heartwarming and not the macabre. So thank u for putting urself through this! LOL.

Yep I suppose Ryokura here are complex. They're like two pple running around in circles with no idea what they want, or rather too busy running away from the truth to realise it. lol I think Ohkura's too adverse to feeling love, since he thinks it makes him being ordinary and all that. Frankly I dun even know how to analyse them. XDDDD

I'm glad I updated too. The drought is getting on my nerves. DDD:

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