And all the days after

Jul 24, 2008 00:22

Uchi Hiroki looked at the man who lay on the bed, pale scars that lined his wrist like a mesh of crisscrosses. Day was gradually slouching into sight and still the apartment remained untouched by brightness, as though trapped in eternal twilight ever since the female owner had left. Uchi sat on the edge of the bed and looked at the wedding gown of ( Read more... )

one-shot, and all the days after

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diac July 23 2008, 20:20:11 UTC
dearest dearest most beloved princess! I'm so happy you finished it and posted it and it is perfect till the last word esp. the last ones as Sosuke ,the loneliest person ever, lost within himself...had in drama his lonely death as the worst punishment and thank you and Uchi! who was and will be fighting his own fears to help Sosuke in this story... you brought us hope. And it's like a miracle. And I feel like crying -what are you doooinngg to me Ash!!!! <333333333333
I'm sosososo touched by this piece! i can't even express it properly!
thank you so much ILU 100000 times
*huuuugs*

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ironicdawn July 23 2008, 22:46:10 UTC
You know, I swear sometimes it seems that Ash makes it her mission to reduce either or both of us to tears, either in complete joy or sadness! XDD;;

Ah too good ^.^b

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ashkt July 24 2008, 09:12:44 UTC
lolol, too much praises heaped on me makes me wanna cringe or smth. But thank u. I should totally attempt fluff next time. XDD Tho I got a feeling my fluff will turn out like snide humor or just plain comedy DDD:

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ironicdawn July 24 2008, 20:30:15 UTC
There is nothing wrong with snide humour or plain comedy! I like them both ^.^b And yes I'm studying law, but not criminal law; I come into contact with DV victims because I volunteer with victim support at courts.

lol! You should take the compliment, you deserve it! ^.^

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ayuzak July 24 2008, 13:24:39 UTC
I don't read RyoUchi ever but since it's you, and Sousuke, so i think why not. I'm glad i did!
The story's painful in a way but still hopeful. It shows how haunting the past can be, but the individual can still break out of it especially with the support of others.

I didn't think Sousuke was portrayed too badly in LF. I pity him most of the time ( because there is no way i can hate a ryo character), he seems so needy and the moment he let Michiru go,he went and give up his own life..,,very tragic.

I do hate the patchy, trying to be happy ending to the drama though.

Ah,sorry, i ranted. Thank you for the fic! It's lovely.

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ashesof_hope July 26 2008, 21:58:46 UTC
I thought the drama was patchy throughout. URGH. And yes once I started on LF, I tend to start ranting so thank you for reading even though it's RyoUchi. :)

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