Slow Burn

[ashesof_hope]

Title : Slow Burn

Comments

[sinyerel]

So sad yet so beautiful.

I like it a lot, your writing is... I don't know how to say it... but while reading Kame's thoughts I felt all hurt and sad myself like Kame was.

Seriously, you're amazing. I hope you write more RyoKame because you do it so SO great ^___________^

[ashesof_hope]

Glad to hear u relate to Kame. It's just hard to come to a decision esp when u're caught in between two guys like Ryo and Jin. XD But yeah I like writing RyoKame alot. They're like my not-so-sekrit otp. Thanks for commenting. ^__^

[emi_loves]

err. oww. this is so sad D: but so so so wonderfully brilliant. write more please!

[akillarian]

RyoKame <3

I'm glad Ryo is slowing filling in the empty space around Kame's heart. Action speaks louder than word. He doesn't promise a relationship but the way he acts show that he does think they are having some kind of a relationship.

I'm glad how Kame has act in the end toward Jin. I was worry he will crash down and stay with Jin again. The circle will once again repeat.

[ashkt]

Seems like u're on the side of Ryo? :)) Yeah I guess Ryo is unsure at first, but slowly he shows that he does care for Kame. Thanks for commenting. Comments alwis put a smile on my face.

[dorayaki_chan]

that was so blunt and sharp, that` was awesome as usual

[kirei_shinigami]

“It’s enough for me.” And with that, Kame felt as though he had ruthlessly cut the last thread holding them together, the last bit of connection that was still between them. And frankly, it hurt.

---the last line got me. it really got into me.

this is a very nice fic ^^ i love it.
it doesn't say much about what happened, just hints and its up to the reader to figure out,
very nice
♥♥♥

[ashkt]

Yes, it leaves quite a bit to the imagination, esp what happened with Kame and Jin but glad u like it nonetheless. Thanks for commenting. :))