Story: "...Please..." Part 2 of 3

[ashkevran]

Here is Part 2 of a Nancy inspired story about Hutch with a pierced ear and Starsky with fire in the belly.

Warning: This story depicts graphic physical love between two men. If this isn't your thing, please stop reading here. I do not own Starsky and Hutch. No detectives, kitchen tables, earrings, or shag carpets were harmed in the telling of this

Comments

[anonymous]

Oh my, Angel...!!!!You were right, sweet blondie has been in for a ride, and what a ride !! Well, as I told you before, it does not seem that it's your first story. It made me blush , lol !
You are very talented and managed to express emotions and feelings in such a way that we are transported with you in the story.
Congratulations on your first story, it's a master-piece... and I 'm not even a slash-addict!
xxxxx By the way, forgot to tell you it's me, Blue Lavender / Emmanuelle from FB !!

[ashkevran]

Hi Blue! Nice to see you here. I enjoyed my hand at guy-on-guy and it is my first attempt at this! :-) It made me blush to write it too, but I relied on the lessons I learned at SHareCon on writing sex scenes to get me through!

Hugs-
-Angel

[sc_fossil]

That was pretty darned hot! You really have written a heavy duty sex scene here with lots of good stuff. Nothing fluffy here but good and hard man on man shagging. *g* I liked it.

[ashkevran]

Thank you so much! A first try...probably not the last. I used CC's recommendation from the sex panel at SHCon - type the words that freak you out over & over & over to get it out of your system. I told Flamingo I wrote a sex story & SHCon had something to do with it and she wrote back saying, "Oh Good! I hope it had something to do with it!"

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Hug
-Angel

Please

[anonymous]

I love the way You write stories the details and the way you put it all together is awesome.

Re: Please

[ashkevran]

Hi there Facebook buddy! :-) Thanks again for tracking me down for the link and for reading. I had fun writing it...alot of fun!

-Angel

[dawnebeth]

Geeze, the child wants her time on the compy, so I couldn't finish reading. BUT I PLAN TO.

HOT.

[ashkevran]

Thank you for stopping by Dawn - I hope you enjoy the rest of the read...

Hugs~

[dawnebeth]

Well, I finally had time to devote to this hot number. Wowza--when you dip your toe into slash, you go in deep, baby.

loved the "You went high this time, partner." "And you went low."

[ashkevran]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it through, Dawn. I guess there's something about the guys together that makes me a bit immodest. Much appreciated, truly!

[ashkevran]

I am just so speechless that you, the true writer amongst us, have such lovely things to say. Thank you! It was a real blast to try and put this on paper. Yes, it is always love with them - love that both guides and drives them. The love flows in so many directions, and when it's expressed sexually, they have got to be the two hottest guys on the planet.

I am writing the brief wrap up chapter this week (hopefully) and then ponder my next story move...

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

xxxooo