Halloween In Terminal City: Chapter One

[ashleykitten69]

Disclaimer: I own nothing. Just playing.
Rating: PG, gen (For now)
Word Count: 4,816 to date.

A/N: Hey ya'll sorry it took a bit, finally got this one done, and am currently working on chapter one. hope you enjoy!

Disclaimer: Yeah sorry i don't own them, if i did i would be too busy playing with them to write.

Chapter One

Max was in a daze all the way to

Comments

[cats_eye78]

She's preggers isn't she? Liking the story so far, but can we please have some OC? She was my fav person on the show, so feisty! Do you think that maybe you need to split the chapter to post with a cut? Sometimes people have to do that for size constraints. Good luck and happy writings!

[ashleykitten69]

Whee Thankies for the review! *hugs* and i will try splitting the chapters up from now on and see if that works, thanks very much for the advice. And yes OC will be around and other than that i can't say what else my muse has run away with. *shifty eyes* new chappie up soon!

[death_of_dreams]

I think reviews make us all happy and inspired. ^^

I love the way you write Alec as a combination of gentle/loving and his usual snarky flirty self. It's nicely done. I'm not a big fan of Logan!asshole - I personally just don't think he would be that way ever - but I think this story has real potential. I'm extremely curious as to what Max would pick for Alec's costume.
Keep writing!

[ashleykitten69]

Thanks! Yeah i noticed after i wrote it how Logan came off and i kinda felt bad. I might fix it in future chapters but i've yet to decide. I am really happy you think it has potential and i hope you like what else i have planned for it *grins*