[Fiction] Mike Meets a Girl

[ashtoreth]

First part here.There are three messages on his machine when Mike finally gets home, drunk and smelling like stale cigarettes and spilled beer. One is from his mom, asking what his plans are for his birthday. One is from a computer that desperately wants to sell him a vacation rental and seems vaguely disconsolate that no one is home to take this

Comments

[cecelle]

Well told - I want to see more!

[djehutysherit]

A relationship told inside out, from the end looking back at the beginning. well set and well unfolded.