I just realized I still haven't said anything constructive for you since you asked a long time ago, I'm sorry!!! I totally forgot!!! Well, I will tell you as much as I can with this one instead of the others, hope that's okay <3.
This is more like a drabble than a oneshot. It was crackish (which is your aim haha)and cute.
Of course, praising you would not help you at all, I'll just give you a few things to concentrate on (no one is perfect, so this is just advice, ne?): First, a plot. Maybe you can think up a plot that would last a few pages long instead of one. This way, you get more practice. There isn't anything wrong with what you are writing, of course, but perhaps a more memorable plot would exercise your skills better. Start out slow and gradually have your plot lengthen <3
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no, that was really helpful. I'll try to make my stories longer and focus on plot and character development when I'm ready to do a chaptered fic. Though to be honest, I don't know if I could write serious fanfiction. I don't think
I was going to say, I don't think I could keep my focus on a serious chaptered fanfiction. I don't know, maybe I'll think differently later. About the length of my fics, I've always had problems with the length of whatever it is I'm writing, even in school when I had papers to write,
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This is more like a drabble than a oneshot. It was crackish (which is your aim haha)and cute.
Of course, praising you would not help you at all, I'll just give you a few things to concentrate on (no one is perfect, so this is just advice, ne?):
First, a plot. Maybe you can think up a plot that would last a few pages long instead of one. This way, you get more practice. There isn't anything wrong with what you are writing, of course, but perhaps a more memorable plot would exercise your skills better. Start out slow and gradually have your plot lengthen <3 ( ... )
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I was going to say,
I don't think I could keep my focus on a serious chaptered fanfiction. I don't know, maybe I'll think differently later.
About the length of my fics, I've always had problems with the length of whatever it is I'm writing, even in school when I had papers to write,
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