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asintomatico

On the Platform- Preface

Jan 30, 2011 00:15

Pairing: JongHo, side OnKey
Rating: G
Genre: Fiction, Science Fiction
Author's Note: Hi! ^^ This is my first time writing a fanfic, is just a small introduction for now. (Also, English is not my first language so I'll be thankful if you let me know about any mistakes)
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the story.

( And the sun came out to kiss them good bye )

of aliens and dinos

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asintomatico January 30 2011, 18:21:31 UTC

Thank you so much :').

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asintomatico January 30 2011, 18:26:52 UTC

Thank you! I'll work hard xD

helleixxe January 30 2011, 08:16:42 UTC

Oh wow- Science fiction! It's one of the less written things around, and I'm excited for this :D (aside from the fact it's two otp's here! haha) good luck to the rest of your first story :D I'll look forward to this :) ♥

There are really not much for grammatical errors, but I think you should choose your words more and :)

asintomatico January 30 2011, 18:31:13 UTC

Thank you! ♥ I appreciate the support.
Yes, it's a bit hard for me at some points and I keep double cheking things all the time. Thank you, I will pay more attention to that on the future. :)

a_life_defiant January 30 2011, 15:26:08 UTC

Awesome start bb!! I love sci-fi and this looks like it's going to be good.

Also, your English is fantastic. If you hadn't said anything, I never would have known. ^^

asintomatico January 30 2011, 18:33:28 UTC

Thanks! ♥ I love this genre too x).

paranoiascreams January 31 2011, 07:00:34 UTC

SCI FI~!

hmn. interesting. And you have good English command, i didnt notice that it wasnt your first language. Keep writing~

Ahwgsdudjjs asintomatico January 31 2011, 17:37:57 UTC

Thank you! <3 ;u; I will~