We're no Different

Feb 03, 2011 11:46

Pairing: JongHo, side OnKey
Rating: PG
Genre: Fiction, Science Fiction
Author's Note: Hope you like it. C:
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the story.

Trios disbanded, privacies invaded )

of aliens and dinos

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helleixxe February 3 2011, 19:53:50 UTC
;___; homfg I love you rn!! ♥
I mean those last parts were just so sweet, and awkward, and it bringing my brain back to the stone age. but whatever, no seriously! this gets better by the chapter, and I hope it goes one :D

There were a few spelling errors, but all that feeling both of their hearts beating in their chests thing threw all those errors out the window, and I'm just loving you rn :D

It seems Jonghyun and Minho has some kind of connection :) but it's hard to tell what exactly. And I wanna know what happened to Onew and Key ;__; did Taemin do something to them! haha xD

lifting his hand to point at the other boy "Taemin" he said, smiling back at Minho, who repeated: "Taemin".
haha! omg, that was just cute :D ♥

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asintomatico February 3 2011, 21:48:05 UTC
Ahhsajhsh thank you! ;o; ♥
Yes, the end was the most fun to write. :)

Sorry about the mistakes u..u;; I have a difficult time sometimes while trying to explain some things because I don't know if they sound right or not o__o;;
I'm experimenting different writing strategies xP so I hope the mistakes are less in the future. ^^

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paranoiascreams February 4 2011, 13:13:29 UTC
MY SPOT.

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adyaby February 6 2011, 03:32:57 UTC
omg this is amazing!!!
so interesting ^^
i want morrreee!! xD
i wonder what happened w/onkey??? @_@

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asintomatico February 6 2011, 06:23:26 UTC
Haha thank youu~ glad you like it :).

Hopefully they're doing fine xD.

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