[SJ Fic] Lights Will Guide You Home (1/2)
Lights Will Guide You Home (1/2): Sungmin/Kyuhyun, Kyuhyun/Donghae (5550 words)
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"If anyone's lucky, it's you. When Kyuhyun shines he's brighter than a thousand suns, and he doesn't even know it!" assured Sungmin. Donghae wondered whether he knew who exactly Kyuhyun was shining for.
( Kyuhyun added ‘menace to society’ on the ‘list of reasons as to why Ryeowook’s stalker friend had to ‘suspiciously’ transfer schools’, referred to as short as ‘Sungmin sucks’ )
for paradigm_twist
"If anyone's lucky, it's you. When Kyuhyun shines he's brighter than a thousand suns, and he doesn't even know it!" assured Sungmin. Donghae wondered whether he knew who exactly Kyuhyun was shining for.
( Kyuhyun added ‘menace to society’ on the ‘list of reasons as to why Ryeowook’s stalker friend had to ‘suspiciously’ transfer schools’, referred to as short as ‘Sungmin sucks’ )
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I apologise in advance if this first part is convoluted and for all the spelling/grammar mistakes. :/ the longer my fics are the less the quality of my writing. So it's not the best written thing ever.
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And ARE YOU SERIOUS? WHAT RUBBISH ARE YOU SPEWING HERE ABOUT BAD QUALITY? =.= It is awesome. I had to read it trice just to fully bask in the awesomeness of it. I don't see any mistakes. But then again, I'm high on this fic xP
I got a bit confused with the texts in the beginning then realized that they were all from Sungmin :D God. I love his first text. Brilliant. The little draft emails from Kyu <3 Oh you.
And one day, Kyuhyun realised, that Donghae would always be there, without fail, sheltering Kyuhyun from problems he didn’t know existed with his obnoxiously yellow umbrella. Can you describe the whole Kyuhae thing any better? This is just perfect <3
“It’s not like I’m enjoying it!”
“That- I can’t even refute that! It refutes itself!” exclaimed Siwon.
Dude. ^ this. THIS. I JUST. I CAN'T EVEN.
“Kyuhyun is just a bit of a bitch, that’s what’s ( ... )
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AND NO IT SURELY DOESN'T MEAN THE PROMPT REQUEST HAS BEEN CHANGED! D:< THE NERVE OF SUCH A SUGGESTION.
And no problem, you deserve a dedication <3 Think of it as a thank you for the 2Woon/SiHae birthday fics, and as motivation to make my request awesome ;P
I was rereading it after I posted in and I was like wallowing in woe at all the grammatical errors, and the spelling mistakes made. *angst* Argh, I finished this part in a rush so like the club scene and forward has like a mountain full of incoherency. And it's sort of convoluted.
But I'm glad you liked it, I shall reply to your comment thoroughly!
hehe, the text/email thing was something I added to make the story unique. of course it failed horrendously, but it was cute to write :3 especially Kyuhyun's emails.
KyuHae writes itself man, seriously <3 I do nothing hehe ( ... )
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I love how you wrote Sungmin and felt a little giddy actually how he's all flirty and unbalances Kyu so much even though I'm hoping against hope that this will eventually be KyuHae >//< But ah well, i'll look forward to the next part!
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I only write Kyu the way I see him in cannon Hehe xP I'm glad you liked the characterisation though. And as for the end pairing... ;P well, they're actually both my OTPs, that's all I'll say.
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Oh, Kyu is going to get straightened out. I'll male sure of it. As for no one getting heartbroken...
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Well, I do love me some kyumin. I need to find a way to make this work without me getting heartbroken in the process.
Thank you for the comment :3
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love love love <3
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