[EXO Fic] Going, Going, Gone

[asisharada]

Going, Going, Gone: Xiumin/Lu Han (4047 words)

Minseok gets a crush and proceeds to be an embarrassment to mankind (and shoujo manga).

Comments

[taemin_knees]

Okay one: this has been my otp since their first interview in china omgggg ;u; they're getting so much lovely lately I could die from happiness.

Two: who gave youe face permission to face made me die. Are you me because this is exactly how I talk.

Three: I love you and am worshipping you rn. Kbaidyinghappy

[asisharada]

1. honestly, i almost flipped tables when i saw then intertwine hands in the first interview in china. haha. i'm actually a big hunhan shipper too -- but huerjnkdfs after all those interviews and fansigning i jumped boat so fast. THEY BETTER CONTINUE THE CHARADE IN LA AND COMMUNIST CHINA. and hurfiwdjskl, i need more fic of them, they're getting more love BUT NOT ENOUGH.

2. omg, i'm basically every single fangirl feeling in the world compressed into one human being ;~~; i made xiumin one too OTL

3. i love you tooo <3 thank you for the adorably adorable comment.

[g_odalisque13]

Kris looks down, “You touched me,” he states, and Minseok withdraws his hand immediately.
/dying

ugh but this is so adorable! i have been craving an adorable xiuhan fic for ages. thank you for writing this! i started a xiuhan fic and it turned into angst OTL but this was so perfect and minseok is adorable and lu han is precious /squishes them
memming this :)

and please write more xiuhan even if you're in denial about being in the exo fandom lol

[asisharada]

um, THERE IS NO EXCUSE, GO AND FINISH YOUR XIUHAN FIC ;~~; i'm sure it's 10000x better than mine, and omg angst, hreiwjdksa. XIUHAN ANGST IS AMAZING, YO. not that we'd actually know SINCE NO ONE WRITES THEM

honestly, if the going gets tough and the number of fics have yet to increase, i'll prolly write more >.<

thank you for the lovely comment :3 <3

[g_odalisque13]

i will finish it, i promise. i'm just working on my shinee big bang fic and it's so long it has totally eaten my life. but then i will finish the xiuhan.
and i suppose we'll just have to see if xiuhan angst is amazing when i finally finish XD

[shihan_ai]

/creeping in/

angsty xiuhan. ANGSTY XIUHAN.
ANGSTY. XIUHAN.

/muffled screaming/

(also hi there again~)

[miss_aztec57]

THIS IS AMAZING. AMAZING I love how fun and and adorable and crazy it is, I was laughing so much ^^ Xiumin you are the cutest human on earth jsyk.

[asisharada]

aaaaw, thank you <3 haha, i was trying to make it as chaotic as possible :3 hehe.

and boazis will be baozis! thank you for the lovely comment <3

[songmaze]

MEMMING.

srsly kudos to you fo including the shojou-esque stuff in the beginning like seeing sparkles in eyes and hearing music in bg with xiuhan. you wrote it in a way that works for them but not being too cute or childish bc xiumin is trying to tell himself, 'why am i seeing these shojo stuff from luhan?!'

great way to get him to realize he's in love.

best xiuhan fic, really is. and it's not only bc there's not a lot of them tbh. it's bc i appreciate that you wrote that 'crush period' xiumin had. a lot of fics don't try to attempt that, they go right to confessing and like, 'ok but not believable'. like you took the time to dissect xiumin and let us into his crush, how he try to avoid luhan, how all the other members knew etc.

and i love how you made xiumin such a luhan fangirl bc that's how we see him too. so we can relate more to this fic.

i adored this and please if you can, WRITE MORE XIUHAN. ;~;

btw what otp dliemma did you go through? (i read your other comments ^^;; )

[asisharada]

ooooh, your comment is so nice and delish <3 :D

aaah, i'm actually getting a kudos for my shojo reference egrjfndksd, thnak you! haha. honestly, i just put that in there because i wanted to make minseok's crush as cheesy and cutesy as possible. and we all know shojo manga is the epitome of cheesy and cutesy :3

best xiuhan fic, really is. and it's not only bc there's not a lot of them tbh.trolololololol, omg that is exactly what i was going to refute you with XD but omg, thank you that's so sweet to hear :3 i'm sure one day another writer will write an even more epic xiuhan fic full of awesome, but for now, i'm glad this appeases you. and it's funny how you mention that, because i originally did not plan this fic to go up to 4000 words, i was actually meant to end at like 2000 at most. but it just felt... so incomplete? and so i added a lot of stuff in the middle to show a more realistic transition period, and i'm glad i got that through :3

[its_rayning]

I CAN'T EXPREEEN WHAT I PHEEL T____T /sobs this whole thing made me wibble so much ;A;

Lu Han slowly walks him forward, pressing Minseok’s petite body against his chest and wrapping an arm around his torso. Yes, YES, SOMEONE FINALLY DESCRIBED MINSEOK AS PETITE!!

“You aren’t sick, you look fine to me,” the nurse stalks over and attempts to pull Minseok off the bed, something that proves to be a difficult feat when he starts clawing the mattress for dear life.“Um, no I’m not, there’s a really weird feeling in my stomach and it won’t go away,” Minseok shrieks, flailing as the nurse pulls him away by the collar. She ushers him out of the room, but Minseok places both palms firmly on the doorframe and refuses to budge. “I really think this should be checked, I could become the start of an epidemic!” OHHH, this whole thing, so freaking cute I CAN'T a;lsdjf;alskd /sobs MINSEOKIEEE.

“Wow, has Lu Han been working out or what? You have some competition Kris,” Minseok laughs and pats Kris’ chest playfully. Kris looks down, “You touched me,”

[asisharada]

GULL, YOUR COMMENT MAKES ME FEEL ALL SQUISHY INSIDE. let me reply to it with my love. ;~~;

HOW CAN I BE THE FIRST ONE TO DESCRIBE XIUMIN AS PETITE ;~~; like, have people SEEN HIM. like those interviews, omg, his legs don't even reach the ground when he's sitting down, and like the ending of ss4 Indonesia where he's being splashed by water -- HE'S BUT A 22 YEAR OLD BABY. he tries denying it with the use of insoles, BUT IT'S FUTILE.

lololol bitch!faced leader is simply forever bitchy :x

AND UM, SHIP EVERYONE/EVERYONE. DUH. like, omg, i ship chenmin so hard, you have no freaking idea. woot, awkward koreans in a chinese band!

YOU CAN DIE ONCE YOU WRITE SOME XIUHAN FICS, OKAY.

also, omg, i've been caught redhanded. YES, MINSEOK'S ENTIRE RANT IS BASICALLY TUMBLR SPEAK :x some of it is quoted word for word from some of my own tumblr tags ;P

lolol i won't lie, i totally forgot about yixing for the entire story and just stuck him in there are the end :x aah, unicorn, i'm sorry <3

[shihan_ai]

(yes i am creeping through your comments instead of studying lol)

have some more chenmin

[asisharada]

/sob

you've appeased me ;~~~; awkward koreaaaans, we all know you were secretly making out and-- greuhifjsdkl

I'M NOT IN EXO FANDOM UBRPE