Line of Scrimmage

[asmallsmackerel]

Title: Line of Scrimmage
Pairing: David Archuleta/David Cook
Summary: In which loyalties are drawn and potato chips are had.
Rating: PG
Word Count:  1,724
Chapter: 1/1
Disclaimer: All of this is fictional and made for fun. I make no profit off of this or claim any rights. I don't own either David.
A/N: Written for schmoop_bingo with the prompt "watching the game

Comments

[tiinakay]

Aw, cute :) I love Archie's interactions with the other guys.

[asmallsmackerel]

Thank you! I'm so glad that you liked that bit, because that was the part I was worried about, so I'm happy that it came over well. :)

[asweetdownfall]

EEEEEEEEEEEE I'm so glad to see you writing again! \o/ This is so freaking cute. I love the banter/camaraderie between the boys [all of them], and the wedding/bride convo, and Archie betting at the end ♥

Love love love!

[asmallsmackerel]

OH HEY IT'S YOU. :D Heeeey, long time, no talk; I hope all is well with you! :) And goodness, your flailing has me flailing about right now. I'm really elated to know that this went over well with you, since I was worried about my characterizations and such, but yeah. THANK YOU. <3

[asweetdownfall]

HIIII! :D I am doing alright! How about you? [And I can't believe you remember me. Oh my gosh!]

And psht, there was no need to worry about your characterizations. They are perfect and spot on. :)

[asmallsmackerel]

Of course I do! You've pretty much been there since comment one (We always talked on and on and on, it was great! <3) I'm glad you're doing well! Hope school has been treating you well. Or at least, that you are enjoying your time off (if you are taking summer off?) But yeah, I'm doing good! :)

GOSH, THANK YOU. <3333

[jehane_writes]

Kirsten, this was fantastic. How you wrote the guys was awesome; that Arch should have made a run for it, the play-by-play. Srsly, one of my favorite things from you <333

[asmallsmackerel]

Aahhhhhh, it thrills me to know that you like how I wrote all of the boys - that was what was making me bite my nails in apprehension over this one. But I had so much fun writing it! And it seriously means a lot to me for you to say it's one of your favorites from me. Wow! Reassures me quite a bit. Thank you! :)

[asmallsmackerel]

It really makes me happy to know that you got a smile out of this, because that was what I was going for. And ack, you saying that about my characterizations of each of these guys just makes me want to leap up in joy! :D

ACK. Your comment just makes me so happy. :) I am grinning from ear to ear. Thank you. ♥

[churchslackzluv]

this is so cute! ♥

[asmallsmackerel]

Yay, I'm happy that you enjoyed it! Thank you! <3