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Mar 20, 2011 13:32

I understand that not everyone is going to want to read through this. But I REALLY want this job, so I hope at least someone will :). Here is what I have written for my reasons for application. Advice/ critisms welcome including pointers on grammar, presentation and spelling. PLEASE HELP!

I am applying for this job as in my previous role at ? School ( Read more... )

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musicbaybee March 21 2011, 18:35:33 UTC


Some corrections id say is:

Modifying activities also helped boast her confidence...

I think you meant *boost* her confidence :-)

*My behaviour management is something I have worked on and now feel confident in my firm but fair approach to pupils. I believe that consistency is the key to behaviour management...*

That can read like you are saying YOU have behaviour problems that you have worked on about yourself. Maybe leave out the MY and add in children for eg: Behaviour management with children is something i have worked on and feel confident in my firm but fair approach with them.

I am able to follow school polices...

Think you mean *policies* you just missed the i out :-)

*School I was often called upon to go into different classes when others TA’s were off..*

On the word others i think you need to take the s off the end of it :-)

Reads really well! I think you have a great chance. Good luck! :-)

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aspergerfemale March 21 2011, 19:56:36 UTC
Crap I've handed it in now and I've left polices in (note to self don't let boyfriend do the typing again!) Hope that one thing doesn't spoil it all.
All the other things I've amended.
Thnak you x

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mcmurphy79 May 5 2011, 19:32:49 UTC
You like yellow

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